I think the whole thing is rather thin. The kick is weak, the bass is a little too loud in the mix, and the lead needs to be present more than it already is. Also the structure of the track is kind of weird. It peaks in an awkward spot with out much of a build up. The breakdown get's a little long with just the pad and the lead and that hit sample. There is a minor chord in there that doesn't really fit either. Keep working at it. The higher end of the mix (cymbals especially) could come down just a touch, in my opinion. It's coming along though. This could shape up to be a pretty nice track with a bit of work!
ozmium
:) thanx for the imput m8 ill keep working on it
Ionosphere
Yeh, what H3RO said. Lots of potential but, imo, a bit premature to put it up on YouTube. ;)
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