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DJ Dizzystick
Junior Member
United States
84 posts Joined: Mar, 2002
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Posted - 2004/01/23 : 00:59:37
it's a hardcore summer!
http://www.mixtapehost.com/~dizzystick/hardcore_summer.mp3 tell me what you think Keep The Beats Bangin
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StrifeII
Advanced Member
United Kingdom
2,143 posts Joined: Mar, 2001
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Posted - 2004/01/23 : 19:24:43
it has a load of potential - the vocals are wickid. leads are very nice, they take me right back. I feel the breaks are a bit too complicated though, keep them simple. It needs a deeper bass, and perhaps a different synth. I'm not sure weather you're going for a 97ish sound or a new sound...if its a new sound, try getting some more trancier synths. try using a stab if its the 97 sound. nice work though, keep writing tunes, you'll go far.
- Blasphemy
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tklown
Advanced Member
United States
512 posts Joined: Nov, 2003
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Posted - 2004/01/23 : 22:05:35
Good track but in the beginning you have too many kicks too close together (or too fast ?), sounds like it was made in fruity loops, like Blasphemy said it has a lot of potential, I love the way you blended the vocals, piano, leads, etc.
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milo
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Canada
3,391 posts Joined: Sep, 2001
347 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2004/01/23 : 22:15:39
yah, deffinately some good stuff, lots of potential
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subnaut
Starting Member
United States
11 posts Joined: Jan, 2004
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Posted - 2004/01/23 : 23:33:02
sweet song, i really liked it. seemed at a bit normalized at times though (maybe pan or add more gain dynamic to the different parts?). also, i would have liked crisper vocals, but i don't really know how you would do that or whether it would be any better...
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