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nrXic
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Canada
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Joined: Feb, 2002
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 Posted - 2002/09/08 : 02:29:09
Hey there, I dunno if this happens to any other producers but I was working on a few tracks, and I get stuck in the middle because the song isn't THAT great.
And lately I've been listening to Next Gen/BB clips in anticipation for their new CD coming out in a few days...and yeah they are on another level!
Anyways here is the track in ogg format (ogg vorbis compression, yes the mp3 killer :) , if you have winamp 2.8 or 3 it will play).
http://www.members.shaw.ca/nrxic/misc/latest.ogg
Definately far from finished (it's repetitive and stuff), just playing with an idea really, but it seems like generic fast eurodance. :P
Tell me what you think. Part of me likes it, part of me thinks that it's pretty blah.
I got another one, this track is something me and Contraption (Xentar) started a LONG time ago, and we kinda stopped.
http://www.members.shaw.ca/nrxic/misc/reasonrxic.ogg
I like the song...but in comparison to the newest stuff coming out...it's so different, and I don't know if people will dig it.
www.mp3.com/nrxic
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pacman
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 Posted - 2002/09/08 : 06:34:29
it's not bad. i like your piano part. i'd like to make some humble suggestions if i may:
* put in some more bass, more kick drum, take some volume out of the treble parts.
* drop out your main synth line for a bit, leave it for the climaxes.
* add in a 4-beat hhc style break beat underneath, it will chop up the sound abit making it sound less eurodancey.
* put in a fatter, 8-beat breakbeat in somewhere.
* don't have the chord changes going all the time, like stay on the first chord for a bit. (especially when you cut back to bass line & drums or whatever)
*have a solid (long notes) chord line at a lower volume, under your main synth line (it will give the sound more depth)
* maybe try some sort of melodic line at some point. or maybe just a vocal sample?
i think all it needs is a bit more variety.
it's really hard for smaller producers to match the standard of sound that's coming out of the NG/BB, Evolution (or any of the bigger labels for that matter). my advice would be to spend a (long) while just tuning & tweaking all your sounds to exactly how you want them, including all your drum sounds etc etc.
good luck. (and welcome to hhc.com!!)
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silver
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Japan
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Posted - 2002/09/08 : 17:30:03
Not bad, the sythns are the best part, I would drop the piano in the first part or re-do it somehow... You need to listen to newer hardcore the tunes sound a little old... anyway my 2 cents
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nrXic
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Posted - 2002/09/13 : 15:42:43
Thanks for the advice guys! I really think your input will really help! I'll post updates in this thread as work progresses. :)
www.mp3.com/nrxic
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