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H3RO
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 Posted - 2010/10/13 : 03:00:40
My newest track I've worked up. I posted a link to it a while ago, but I've made some changes to it, so I posted the new version. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!
http://soundcloud.com/h3ro73/drums-like-thunder
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2010/10/13 : 19:15:44
Has the beginnings of a nice track but IMO musically it isn't quite there. Nearly... But play with th notes more as it sounds awkward and doesn't flow quite right. I think the kick and bass need to be much more solid too. HTH. :)
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H3RO
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Posted - 2010/10/14 : 22:39:28
Could you be a little more specific as to where in the melody? Or is it the whole thing in general? I appreciate the advice!!!
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2010/10/14 : 22:53:02
I thought the whole riff just needs looking at. You have the basics and patern if a nice riff just some of the notes don't do it for me personally. It didn't really move me in any way and is lacking a nice musical flow.
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H3RO
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Posted - 2010/10/15 : 03:54:15
Hmm. I've listened to it a few times since reading this, and I just don't know what I could change. To me, everything clicks. And I'd like to say that I have a decent understanding of musicality. Maybe it's just because I wrote it, but I don't know. There is also the fact that everyone has different tastes and opinions on music. But again, I do appreciate the feedback and advice. I will play around with it and see if something else comes about.
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2010/10/15 : 11:26:53
That's fair enough mate, just trying to give honest feedback. :) Music is subjective of course. I do like the feel of what you're doing with the breakdown though, it's a nice idea for a tune.
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Edited by - Audio Warfare on 2010/10/15 11:31:28 |
My latest track:
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