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Pulse89
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Hungary
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 Posted - 2011/03/13 : 21:49:53
Hi !
Let me know what you guys think of it!!!
http://soundcloud.com/pulsehardcore/pulse-vision-control-original
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Warnman
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Posted - 2011/03/13 : 22:11:08
I like it a lot! Maybe teasing the listeners simply by installing a short break before the main part sets in might sound better (1:08).
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2011/03/13 : 23:32:46
I like the the main chord progression but I find that I need a bit more variation structure-wise to make it something worth coming back to. Just the buildups as variety ain't enough.
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Pulse89
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Posted - 2011/03/14 : 18:43:15
nice comments :D :D
Bump!!
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2011/03/14 : 19:01:36
I like this mate. Have dropped some comments on SC too. :)
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KittenNipples
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United States Minor Outlying Islands
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Posted - 2011/03/14 : 21:35:22
quote:
Originally posted by Warnman:
I like it a lot! Maybe teasing the listeners simply by installing a short break before the main part sets in might sound better (1:08).
I totally agree, you have a great sound, but that little break and the beat kicking back in would get me so psyched! Wonderful tune though.
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H3RO
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United States
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Posted - 2011/03/15 : 19:43:25
I like the idea of the track. There's nothing really special about it though. I think the lead could use a little work. Maybe another layer or two to make it a little thicker. The riff needs a little variation, too. I think the track as a whole needs a little work. There isn't a lot of energy to it and there's no real climax. Also, I would take the "unsigned" part out of the title. Unless a label is posting the track, it's generally safe to assume that it's unsigned. To me, it just looks pushy and a tad bit arrogant.
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_firefly_
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2011/03/18 : 00:32:59
While we all have our own preferences and your opinions/feedback regarding the actual track is valid as thats the point of this thread, calling someone arrogant for letting people know his track is unsigned makes me confused. Are you just deliberately being negative for the sake of it?
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H3RO
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Posted - 2011/03/18 : 04:18:47
No, but if he's looking to get signed, there is unfortunately more to it than just music. You need an image. To me, having "unsigned" in the title of the demo looks unprofessional. I have no doubts that he/she is a very nice and respectable person and by no means to I think they're arrogant. I merely meant it comes off as a tad bit arrogant, which I believe is what I said.
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