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Kayin
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United States
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Joined: May, 2009
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 Posted - 2013/11/26 : 18:50:48
Ah it's been a while since I came back here. Mainly because I was working on music but didn't want to bombard you all with threads every release.
Anyway, I started something last week and was wondering if some of you wouldn't mind taking a listen to and telling me how it sounds sound design wise (I'm still learning that but it's loads better than it was before) and if it sounds good as a song all together (would you listen to it on your free time or play it in a club). I made a minute long demo but also have a full version of it in case you wanted to hear it all.
Short:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/135819461/Untitled%20Demo.mp3
Full:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/135819461/Untitled%20Demo%20Full.mp3
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2013/11/26 : 21:10:12
Hey dood. welcome back. :)
The sound design part sounds really good over here. Sounding really solid. Intro is a bit generic but well produced. I would suggest trying to insert a complementing chord progression within the arrangement, just to spice things up a bit more.
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Kayin
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United States
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Posted - 2013/11/27 : 19:31:39
Thanks for the suggestion ^_^
Yeah I never seem to be good at all when it comes to intros/outros but I'll keep experimenting and see what I can come up with. Thanks again!
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Cheeky banter between Jimmy and the lady behind the plexiglass:
Woman: Saw you on TV Friday night.
Jimmy Carr: Di-did you, what did you think?
W: Well it's clearly no match for Jonathan Ross.
J: Well that's interesting because I f*cked your mom.
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