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dannyrcore
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2014/10/09 : 21:07:41
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ViolonC
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Germany
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Posted - 2014/10/09 : 22:37:39
Hm, not really much happening in the track. Most of the samples seem out of tune, too.
I hope you don't mind some honest critique. The production sounds pretty decent but it lacks arrangement and song writing.
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dannyrcore
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Posted - 2014/10/10 : 14:50:55
thanks for ya comment... this is just a sample, i know it needs things happenin to it. bear in mind ive only been producing music 10 months.
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2014/10/11 : 01:39:59
I actually think there's a bit too much going on in how you're mixing in and out elements. It feels very random.
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