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The Deviant Senior Member
United Kingdom
329 posts Joined: May, 2004
Posted - 2005/05/23 : 12:25:43
I've not been online lately as I've been trying to write a new tune, and out of the 50 or so that I've started, Here's what I've come up with.
Charco Advanced Member
Ireland
1,979 posts Joined: Nov, 2001
Posted - 2005/05/23 : 15:26:55
Quite a good tune there!! Excellent in fact!! Looking forward to the finished product.
Best thing to do I suppose, Is to sent it off to record companies....In big bright yellow envelopes (Gains the persons attention more = more chance of them giving it a listen).
Best of luck with getting it signed!!
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bulby_g Advanced Member
United Kingdom
7,205 posts Joined: Apr, 2004
430 hardcore releases
Posted - 2005/05/23 : 16:43:40
nout wrong with a one track demo a label will still sign it if they like. it will listen to it when I get home i'm at work now.
icex Advanced Member
United States
644 posts Joined: Aug, 2004
Posted - 2005/05/27 : 15:47:51
hey i think its a good track, good production.. mixdown, the kicks and bass sound great, but i feel that something is missing.
i think you need to build more to it add more synths and maybe some vocal fx or just about anything to spice it up and then it would be a great song.
you can do so much stuff to this track why send it out now, build build build.
yaddam205 Advanced Member
United States
1,219 posts Joined: Dec, 2004
53 hardcore releases
Posted - 2005/05/27 : 22:54:55
WOW,
At the beginning of that song it sounded like one of the many other people here trying to get signed but as it went on it got a shit load better love the piano work!
My only thing was the intro apart from that, thats a damn good trax
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The Deviant Senior Member
United Kingdom
329 posts Joined: May, 2004
Posted - 2005/05/28 : 12:32:44
Thanks for the suggestions guys. As this is the best track I've done im not gonna rush into ripping apart just yet. But I would like it to be the best it can be. Hopefully some new ideas will come.
Luna-C Average Member
United Kingdom
222 posts Joined: Dec, 2004
Posted - 2005/05/28 : 14:32:15
As I was wandering through the forums anyway, I thought I would have a listen. This is not my sort of thing really - but its one of the better made demo's I have heard. The only real fault is that it doesn't have enough personality - it sounds a little generic. But on the plus side, the piano is wicked (I would have used that more, lol) and the eq sounds pretty good. Perhaps a vocal and a few finishing touches production-wise and you would have a tune that would be a serious contender. That my 2 pence worth anyway. Nice one though - keep at it.
eLASTIC Advanced Member
Australia
637 posts Joined: Mar, 2005
Posted - 2005/05/29 : 04:42:22
Absolutey n Totally Awesome Mate!
I guess you could add vocals to it.
But it sounds mad enough as it is.
Im 100% this will get signed lol.
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