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eddiewould
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New Zealand
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 Posted - 2005/07/09 : 10:37:20
Finished this tune today. Its an update to the version I posted already in the production forum.
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Lemme know what you think :)
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DiamondDog
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Posted - 2005/07/09 : 10:44:22
Good track mate, not really my style but sounding good. Intro could do with lengthening though for ease of mixing.
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DarrenJ
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Posted - 2005/07/09 : 12:40:57
I like it :)
Is that captain jack going "hey"? hehe
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eLASTIC
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Australia
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Posted - 2005/07/09 : 13:28:13
Hey sounding pretty good man!
Think it could do with more crashes.
Definately heaps o potential to work with!
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eddiewould
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Posted - 2005/07/12 : 11:38:44
What do I need to do to take this to the "next level" ?
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Jax
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Posted - 2005/07/12 : 12:50:35
i think the intro needs more of a build up and the possibly try not to make the full track so full on. otherwise i think its quality. somethin to be proud of 
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Doughboy
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Posted - 2005/07/12 : 23:13:14
A break down would be awesome in this....a hip-hopy or bouncy jungle breakdown would do this track some good. I like it tho
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Jax
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 00:21:37
not much feedback here, is everyone getting lazy 
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 00:25:00
Vocals are realyl good, basslnie sounds cool with the voclas but the productino needs soem work. Needs breakdowns, more emotion and a stronger lead ;) thats just my opinion.
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Kryptic
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 16:31:12
Kicking tune. I am really liking the vocals. Needs more of an intro and a break down would make this track better. I'd spin this track in a mix. What program are you using to make this? I use Kinetic and I can never make my drums sound that good.
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Splix
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 17:46:57
I realy like this tune. Keep it up mate. Sounds pretty much perfect to me. you just gota add the start and ur done. Harder Kick maby.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 23:52:17
sounds real good mate just needs an intro and a breakdown as said above that vocal would go really well with a piano in a breakdown.
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GaryMaguireXL
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Posted - 2005/07/14 : 00:02:07
Sound good,
Now the Intro just pops out of no where, and I would agree with sean about throwing a breakdown in there to stop it from getting repetitive.
Needs more work on the Vocals , they seem very raw.
hope it helps
XL ;)
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