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Leto
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 Posted - 2007/07/30 : 03:07:08
This is a work in progress.
It's a bit of a techy, ambient breaks track. So, let me know what y'all think. Used Logic to make it. :D
Enjoy!
Leto - Destroy
Oh, and leave feedback, but keep in mind that this is my second production ever...period.
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Leto
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Posted - 2007/07/30 : 23:30:54
WOO! 14 views and no feedback. IT REALLY DOES SUCK! :D:D:D:D:D
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Meph751
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Posted - 2007/07/30 : 23:41:55
i didn't listen because i honestly cannot sit and listen to any ambient music, it drives me insane
but to be nice, i did! and...the production sounds pretty crisp to me, and i do like the parts where you've actually got the breaks going. but in the end it's ambient music, and i cannot stand ambient music!
wish i could be more helpful! haha
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/07/30 : 23:56:55
Hmm...sounds decent but severly lacking in a few areas. For one, I don't like the sound design at all. The drums are too techy, the lead is really annoying, and the bass has no power to it. The mixdown is rather good, which kept the track afloat. TBH, I couldn't get into it at all, because the whole song is way too minimal. The drums need to be more complex and natural, and there just needs to be more going on. Have the pads "evolve" more in the way they sound, and maybe add in a 303. You can keep the techy sound to the drums, but layer it under a chopped natural break. A big, grinding bass would be helpful too, and it would give the song a lot more energy. You can still keep a techy, ambient feel to it, but still make it a breaks track.
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Leto
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Posted - 2007/07/31 : 01:27:55
Did a big update. I like the ideas Pope. Have to learn how to do that though. :P
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