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nantk
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 Posted - 2014/03/22 : 20:16:50
https://soundcloud.com/i-love-tribal/wip/s-t2HiZ
What do you think guys?
As I know you are going to ask, the pads are from bluemans masterpiece, really looking forward for the final version: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tn5yj7cdctc
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Bad Corey
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Posted - 2014/03/22 : 21:18:31
This is a really beautiful melody, really like where this is going so far. To be honest, this sounds more like 2002-2003 era trancecore to me than freeform, which is not a bad thing at all. Hardcore producers recently have been reviving all sorts of older genre style, and I personally am all for it. :)
This is just a stylistic criticism, and if you don't like it, obviously don't use it, but try changing the rolling bassline from a straight 16th roll to a 234 roll. What I mean is remove the note from the 1st 16th of every set of 4, essentially where ever there's a kick, take the bass note out. Like I said, purely a stylistic choice, but I think it could improve the sound a bit. :)
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Samination
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Posted - 2014/03/23 : 14:54:09
Sounds more like an attempt on Makina to be honest, while using more english sounding kick. But the melody is very nice.
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nantk
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Posted - 2014/04/02 : 13:41:48
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Originally posted by Bad Corey:
This is a really beautiful melody, really like where this is going so far. To be honest, this sounds more like 2002-2003 era trancecore to me than freeform, which is not a bad thing at all. Hardcore producers recently have been reviving all sorts of older genre style, and I personally am all for it. :)
This is just a stylistic criticism, and if you don't like it, obviously don't use it, but try changing the rolling bassline from a straight 16th roll to a 234 roll. What I mean is remove the note from the 1st 16th of every set of 4, essentially where ever there's a kick, take the bass note out. Like I said, purely a stylistic choice, but I think it could improve the sound a bit. :)
hmm will try to do that, too see how it sounds
thanks also samination for listening :P
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Triquatra
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Posted - 2014/04/02 : 14:44:23
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Originally posted by Samination:
while using more english sounding kick.
GOOD DAY! TSHH HELLO THERE TSHH RATHER! TSHH! WHATO! TSHH GOOD LORD! TSHH! AWFULLY SORRY! TSHH!
:D
seriously though
I think it sounds really good, though I would say that bass needs rampin' up and the lead sticks out a little too much in the mix
crack on, it sounds great! :)
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SkylerOfficial
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Posted - 2014/04/06 : 07:31:53
The fact that you used Andy Blueman makes it amazing ;) It's a shame he decided to leave the trance scene. He truly is an amazing producer.
And I agree with Corey: it sounds more trancey than actual freeform, but that gives the track an original sound. But that's natural with Andy Blueman elements. ;)
Just personal preference, but do you plan to use more percussions? Because in my opinion, a few hats wouldn't hurt and spice up the track.
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Ken Masters
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Posted - 2014/04/06 : 11:30:33
quote:
Originally posted by Triquatra:
quote:
Originally posted by Samination:
while using more english sounding kick.
GOOD DAY! TSHH HELLO THERE TSHH RATHER! TSHH! WHATO! TSHH GOOD LORD! TSHH! AWFULLY SORRY! TSHH!
:D
excellent impression of an English kick, care to try a Scottish one? ;)
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