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Doc McFly94
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United States
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 Posted - 2021/11/18 : 08:24:55
Hey, it's me again. I put a lot of work into this one and had loads of fun making it!
Feel free critique it! I need the improvement!
Thanks in advance!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1832SOGUPmb6TLF360EXOj4xB-wdPsZvZ/view?usp=sharing
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Edited by - Doc McFly94 on 2021/11/18 08:28:18 |
DUNE.wtf
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Netherlands
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Posted - 2021/11/19 : 13:49:10
Maybe a bit less of the vocals, or more variations in them.. Now its getting a bit monotone.. Chrunch up every fourth and every second should have some minor variation in it.. The eight maybe do a slow down and make the voice sound more bass or something wicked,, you know! Kinda like you would do with your drums, that pattern but then in the vocal/voice sample.
When you have the break perhaps let it fade in more slow.. With eq or volume. U know sweep it up. Not just start somewhere (for my feeling) random with a full one voice. Ease us in to it.
For sure has potential but that vocal is to much for my likings. Kicks sound clean and strong and I like the vibe, just a little bit more effort and you are good to go!
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2021/11/19 : 16:28:24
The mixdown is great. Levels are spot on. Not so keen on the melody, though. The progression is a bit of a downer.
It is somehow not uplifting (me). The vocal sample is again a little repetitive. put it through some glitch effects or something, for variations sake.
I do however admire how close you're getting to the old uk sound! :)
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Doc McFly94
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Posted - 2021/11/19 : 23:43:46
Thanks for all the creative input guys. I'll keep it mind. Honestly, most of my inspiration comes from Scott Brown and Ultravibes. Also, I find it difficult to find fitting vocal samples that contain more than a few words. I'm still learning, and I'm sure that I'll eventually get it down. With melody, I wanted to keep it consistent, because to me too much variation turns into a big mess. Lol
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2021/11/20 : 05:02:57
Melody-wise it's just not hitting the right notes (again, for me).
The supersaw variation that comes in at 2:36 just clashes, to my ear.
I can totally hear the ultravibes influence now. Scott Brown I could pick out from the riff.
you might want to revisit the note choices.
In general, This one has got real potential and does not deserve to go under the carpet! :)
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DUNE.wtf
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 Posted - 2021/11/20 : 21:27:52
Yeah well done that for sure!
Vocals suck anyway its not just you, but the variations at least hides(?) it a bit and makes it more part of the beat/song.
For me it was uplifting tho.. But im used to reall dark shit.. Can I say shit here? Anyways..
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Another new track! Could this be my next banger?
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