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ozmium Advanced Member United States 521 posts
Posted - 2011/05/02 : 12:35:25
VIDEO http://soundcloud.com/ozmium/dj-roxx-weekend-has-come https://www.facebook.com/pages/Ozmium/ http://soundcloud.com/ozmium http://www.youtube.com/user/HardcoreEnergyPromo https://www.facebook.com/pages/Hardcore-Energy Alert moderator
ozmium Advanced Member United States 521 posts
Posted - 2011/05/02 : 14:17:22
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D-tor Advanced Member United States 1,143 posts
Posted - 2011/05/03 : 00:42:00
A bump within 2 hours of initial post? lol
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ozmium Advanced Member United States 521 posts
Posted - 2011/05/03 : 02:10:59
it went grey :O lol
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H3RO Junior Member United States 145 posts
Posted - 2011/05/03 : 02:24:57
I think the whole thing is rather thin. The kick is weak, the bass is a little too loud in the mix, and the lead needs to be present more than it already is. Also the structure of the track is kind of weird. It peaks in an awkward spot with out much of a build up. The breakdown get's a little long with just the pad and the lead and that hit sample. There is a minor chord in there that doesn't really fit either. Keep working at it. The higher end of the mix (cymbals especially) could come down just a touch, in my opinion. It's coming along though. This could shape up to be a pretty nice track with a bit of work!
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ozmium Advanced Member United States 521 posts
Posted - 2011/05/03 : 04:04:03
:) thanx for the imput m8 ill keep working on it
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Ionosphere Advanced Member United Kingdom 3,750 posts
Posted - 2011/05/03 : 16:43:39
Yeh, what H3RO said. Lots of potential but, imo, a bit premature to put it up on YouTube. ;)
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Free Track :)
Printer friendly
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