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CiALiN
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 Posted - 2010/01/02 : 01:22:20
Artist: Function c
Title: Blackout
Remixer: Simpleton
Time: 4.48 sample
Status: undecided whether to finish
Bitrate: 192k
Label: undecided
anyway been ages since i posted the only other sample ive ever posted on here,so thought id clip the tune im doing to see what a few people thought whether it should be finished or not...
anyway the track was a trance track i started in november and made a hardcore mix of it..but since then one of my moniters broke so dont have speakers to listen through so most of the tune is made through 20€ headphones
anyway linkage:
http://www.mediafire.com/?wyvtyjqnymy
any feedback would be appreciated
cheers
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acidfluxxbass
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 Posted - 2010/01/04 : 11:29:45
will this out when im home!
Going by your other stuff, this should be a pretty sweet tune :)
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CiALiN
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Posted - 2010/01/04 : 17:49:40
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Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
will this out when im home!
Going by your other stuff, this should be a pretty sweet tune :)
haha cheers olly...bitta constructive critism wouldnt go a miss
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2010/01/04 : 18:04:55
sounded very well produced, but its not my type of hardcore at all. But nice one anyway :)
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CiALiN
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Posted - 2010/01/04 : 18:40:27
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Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
sounded very well produced, but its not my type of hardcore at all. But nice one anyway :)
cheers man and yeah tbh its not mine either..just felt like giving something different a go
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Meathead
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Posted - 2010/01/04 : 18:59:12
Sounds good. To say it was made on shitty headphones really good, but yeah, musically, it's not my thing.
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Fractal Dimension
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Posted - 2010/01/04 : 19:12:21
Nice tune with a unique flavour, well worth finishing in you ask me. Some random thoughts in chronological order:
0:27 Nice little lead line coming in.
0:39-0:56 Good job on those transition FX, nice use of the flanger, which is a surprisingly underused effect in hardcore. I also like the gated noise FX fading out.
1:10-1:25 Again, great transition, but the drop is somewhat unsatisfying after the buildup.
1:58 Not sure about the timing of that second breakdown, might come a bit too soon.
2:30 You might want to beef up that breakbeat with some distortion, but that might just be personal taste, since many new hardcore tracks have similar sounding breaks.
3:14-3:31 This transition is a bit overproduced for my taste: you sprinkled lots of neat tricks and FX in there, but somehow it ended up being too complex.
3:31- I like the main lead line and the gated synth in the background.
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CiALiN
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Posted - 2010/01/04 : 19:20:24
cheers meathead..thanks for the listen
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Originally posted by Fractal Dimension:
Nice tune with a unique flavour, well worth finishing in you ask me. Some random thoughts in chronological order:
0:27 Nice little lead line coming in.
0:39-0:56 Good job on those transition FX, nice use of the flanger, which is a surprisingly underused effect in hardcore. I also like the gated noise FX fading out.
1:10-1:25 Again, great transition, but the drop is somewhat unsatisfying after the buildup.
1:58 Not sure about the timing of that second breakdown, might come a bit too soon.
2:30 You might want to beef up that breakbeat with some distortion, but that might just be personal taste, since many new hardcore tracks have similar sounding breaks.
3:14-3:31 This transition is a bit overproduced for my taste: you sprinkled lots of neat tricks and FX in there, but somehow it ended up being too complex.
3:31- I like the main lead line and the gated synth in the background.
and what a wicked bit of feedback...ill try sort some of the things you mentioned..thanks for taking the time to d so :D
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Fractal Dimension
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Posted - 2010/01/04 : 19:50:18
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and what a wicked bit of feedback...ill try sort some of the things you mentioned..thanks for taking the time to d so :D
You're welcome, I know how helpful a second pair of critical ears can be, when you've spent far too much time on a tune to be able to be unbiased about it.
On that note, some feedback on my latest semi-finished tune would be much appreciated... ;)
http://www.happyhardcore.com/forums/topic.asp?topic_id=48319
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CiALiN
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Posted - 2010/01/04 : 19:51:58
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Originally posted by Fractal Dimension:
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and what a wicked bit of feedback...ill try sort some of the things you mentioned..thanks for taking the time to d so :D
You're welcome, I know how helpful a second pair of critical ears can be, when you've spent far too much time on a tune to be able to be unbiased about it.
On that note, some feedback on my latest semi-finished tune would be much appreciated... ;)
http://www.happyhardcore.com/forums/topic.asp?topic_id=48319
haha yeah your right..this took me extra long since my moniters decided to pack it in...ill have a gander now dude
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New tune .....feedback please
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