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StrifeII
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 Posted - 2003/11/08 : 13:54:49
Well, just got a new tune up and am wanting some feedback on it.
Hi-Quality Stream (For the broadband posse)
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=658633&q=Hi
Lo-Quality Stream (For you 56kers boo hiss!)
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=658633&q=Lo
Download on request only.
Cheers!
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Seany
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Posted - 2003/11/08 : 15:01:52
i had a listen to a couple ,good work  it would be nice to know which one is the new one ,but im guessing as its the top 1....?
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djtommyrenegade
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Posted - 2003/11/08 : 15:27:59
smilee, one of the links is for lo-fi one is for hi-fi, both the same song
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StrifeII
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Posted - 2003/11/08 : 15:47:57
think he means on my site...but aint sure. If yes the top on (breathe remix) is my new one and if its on this forum then theyre the same :)
- Robbie Jay
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Seany
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Posted - 2003/11/08 : 15:55:32
yes i know they are djtommyrenegade ,but they linked me to his main page thats why ,and i use soundclick so i guessed that ,it was the top 1...
oh and i meant the top song on his music page
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Leelo1
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Posted - 2003/11/09 : 06:09:58
robbie jay u got sum talen mr i still got ur remix of ghosts
DO NOT DISTURB DJ IN PROGRESS
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whispering
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Posted - 2003/11/09 : 07:32:58
Good tune and the feedback:
The Piano should have more volume, and add the piano also on the back round on the second half, when the tune kicks back in (4:10)...
and on the breakdown (dont know if thats the right word) the "gaps" should be shorter or should have something, echo from the last sound or something like that... and IMO the vocal sample doesnt fit on that type of tune... If you need vocal samples, e-jay's have some good ones that are royalty free, eventhough they are very cliche sounding, but they are good to use before you get a "real" vocalist... The "slow" part would be better with some vocals...
But the tune is very good, keep up the good work 
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silver
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Posted - 2003/11/09 : 20:58:29
My 2 cents: Piano needs work, need to tighten the drums, HH's and claps and lose the distortion.... plus the gaps were there is no sound is a little weird.
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Reese
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Posted - 2003/11/12 : 20:00:55
piano needs fixing... wasn't really paying much attention to the percussion.. i did like the build tho.. very choice!
throw some extra reverb on your leads and maybe add a tiny bit of release.. that should help fill in those gaps silver was talking about.
other than that, not a bad tune IMO
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StrifeII
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Posted - 2003/11/13 : 07:45:21
thanks people, if my new games dont get here tonight, i'll suss some stuff out.
- Robbie Jay
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2003/11/13 : 15:22:21
I wont really put my opinions on becasue i don't produce very well yet. BUT they are very good sounding to me! keep it up
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StrifeII
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Posted - 2003/11/14 : 16:37:40
lol mate...an opinion is an opinion, you dont have to rate on quality or anything, just the general tune. and i'd be happy to help you out a bit over msn if you like. cheers for reviewing :)
- Robbie Jay
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