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dj-freedom Average Member
United Kingdom
197 posts Joined: May, 2003
Posted - 2003/12/19 : 12:47:40
Ok guys, I havnt got any sound clips yes as we're just starting out but Ive got some ideas for lyrics here and some honest oppinions would be wicked!!
Here we go:
I think you know
what i'm too scared to say
Dont run away, dont hide
The truth that hurts
I'll keep inside
'cos i know your
In his arms tonight
Everytime I close my eyes n dream
I hold you baby,
Love you maybe
Cant stop dreaming
Cant stop feeling
Then I'm torn apart
By the morning light........
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Darkness,
Not a shadow in sight
In my life
There's a glimmer of light
It's a hope burning deep inside
Of a love that I just cant hide
This is forever.........
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So much to give you
Baby I care
Its just not right that you're not here
Seconds pass
Year by year
Its just not right that you're not here.......
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I cant believe the way i feel
So new and unexplained
I felt alone in this heartless world
But you took away the pain
A miricle in this crazy world
Your light is shining through
Everything i wished or dreamed
I found within you
Take me away
By your side I know i'll find my way
Hold me close in ecstacy
You give me hop, set me free
Take my hand and we'll be strong forever............
whispering Moderator
Finland
8,453 posts Joined: Nov, 2002
Posted - 2003/12/19 : 14:33:49
quote:Originally posted by dj-freedom:
Darkness,
Not a shadow in sight
In my life
There's a glimmer of light
It's a hope burning deep inside
Of a love that I just cant hide
This is forever.........
I liked that one, i read it like this:
Darkness, not a shadow in sight
In my life, there's a glimmer of light
It's a hope, burning deep inside
Of a love, that I just cant hide
_______________________________________________________ "Koskaan ei ole liian myöhäistä olla se, joka olisit voinut olla"
dj-freedom Average Member
United Kingdom
197 posts Joined: May, 2003
Posted - 2004/01/09 : 15:28:56
Cheers guys!!
Nice to get some posative feedback. Will post some more soon!!
OK, here's a quick one off the top of my head....
Take my hand
Give me all the pain you feel
My command
Is every wish you need to come true
Forever I shall Love you
And I know you understand
Emotion still surrounds me
Strong together we will stand....
radiokate Advanced Member
United Kingdom
791 posts Joined: Mar, 2002
Posted - 2004/01/09 : 18:48:01
awwwww ever so pretty (mucho appreciation actually mate!) espesh like the fact u managed to slip the word 'ecstasy' in- a song aint a song without that!!!
Spine Tingling Sensations To Leave Your Mind Numb...
Ka*
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Spine Tingling Sensations To Leave Your Mind Numb...
So much to give you
Baby I care
Its just not right that you're not here
Seconds pass
Year by year
Its just not right that you're not here.......
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I likeked this one the most! Your lyrics aren't very happy anyway. When I write some lyrics I'm really happy with full of energy, or upset and this helps to loose the depressing thoughts.
There is one of my lyrics....(One of my friends and I made a tune to this, with happy melody and vocal)
Verdant hills and sparklings sky
The true feelings will never die
Your warm embrace is oh, so sweet
So take my hands and feel the heat
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Another:
Never thought the sun will come out one day
The sky is blue to feel another way
My mind has changed as I’m in ecstasy
And I’ve got freedom in my fantasy
Jon O-T Advanced Member
United Kingdom
929 posts Joined: Jun, 2005
Posted - 2005/07/26 : 16:45:44
Nice lyrics guys!
Its just hard to imagine them without the music, but im sure there all good!
*just realises most of the posts are from 2003* Lynny, must have taken a while to find this! LOL
Why oh why cant you just accept it,
why oh why cant you just accept it,
Im a raver not a f**king drug addict,
yeah thats right i know youll think ill realy like it,
Leave me alone it my life i think its,
S O R T E D
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whittle1 Advanced Member
United Kingdom
3,191 posts Joined: Jan, 2005
25 hardcore releases
Posted - 2005/07/26 : 20:38:41
[quote]Originally posted by dj-freedom:
I think you know
what i'm too scared to say
Dont run away, dont hide
The truth that hurts
I'll keep inside
'cos i know your
In his arms tonight
Everytime I close my eyes n dream
I hold you baby,
Love you maybe
Cant stop dreaming
Cant stop feeling
Then I'm torn apart
By the morning light........
Them lyrics my friend sounds boss!
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