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okidam
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United States
16 posts
Joined: Oct, 2003
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 Posted - 2004/01/21 : 05:40:54
hey yo, i have the rough copy of a new track finished, if you could, check it out, and let me know what you think. any and all comments, critiques, constructive critisizms are welcome!
Http://underground.okiart.net/media/okidam_follow_full.mp3 96kps MP3
its a vocal happy hardcore track, with a crazy jungle-esque breakdown in the middle.
Right at the first breakdown, i have to fix it - its a very dull and anticlimatic finish to a buildup, im on dial up so i havent got to upload a newer version yet (and im up guaranteed to 7am if i touch my track, and im not touching it yet XD im going to give myself a couple days to recover).
The male vocal is also TEMPORARY until i find a suitable female vocalist.
I also am dying to change the first higher synth instrument you hear, but i use solely software synthesizers, currently and old version of Reason, and i havent found the best sound for it yet. it just sounds... kind of weak.
Let me know what you guys think though on construction, and any other thoughts on it?
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okidam
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United States
16 posts
Joined: Oct, 2003
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Posted - 2004/01/21 : 06:24:08
other track of mine -
http://underground.okiart.net/media/okidam_finedayrmx.mp3
an original mix of the old track Its A Fine Day by Opus III, entitled One Fine Day. Its a hardcore breakbeat track. the mix down is pretty poopy, i soon need to go back and tweak the EQs to make it much better.
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Lixx
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United States
1,338 posts
Joined: Aug, 2001
288 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2004/02/26 : 04:58:03
Haha I haven't been checking this site as much as I'd like to recently but I just wanted to say I really like your take on Fine Day
http://underground.okiart.net/media/okidam_follow_full.mp3
^^^Just so I can download the other track
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