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NuFoundation
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Posted - 2004/04/04 : 12:08:21
Hi guys, I've uploaded new tune to my FTP I would appreciate some feedback on. Cheers.
http://homepage.eircom.net/~djprobe/nth.mp3 Hardcore Til I Die.
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Triquatra
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Posted - 2004/04/04 : 13:40:56
wow, thats a great track! - if you dont mind me asking, what software/hardware are you using?
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StrifeII
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Posted - 2004/04/04 : 14:12:34
sounding very nice from the start, percussion is nice and hard. Perhaps bring the synth in by starting at low cutoff and slowly building it up, its a bit sudden. Use a pad too, sounds a bit bland espesh in the breakdown. Damn nice melody, really epic. Loving the fills at 1:30 :) bassline sounds way out of tune though, id fix that, this track is oozing potential. Nice amen section :)
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NuFoundation
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Posted - 2004/04/04 : 15:43:19
Cheers guys for the feedback and suggestions so far, I think the bass sounding out of tune is due to the 64kbps encode. I'm using FL Studio, no hardware.
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DJ Phoenix
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Posted - 2004/04/04 : 19:56:02
Great tune Probe, keep up the good work... 
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NuFoundation
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Posted - 2004/04/04 : 20:14:50
Cheers man. 
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NuFoundation
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Posted - 2004/04/05 : 10:35:49
Any more takers? :D
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Exhile
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Posted - 2004/04/05 : 10:38:06
I will have a listen later when i get the chance mate
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NuFoundation
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Posted - 2004/04/05 : 10:45:08
Wicked man. Thanks. 
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DJ Superman
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Posted - 2004/04/05 : 12:44:46
really like this tune mate, it's got loads of atmosphere. once the bassline's sorted then it'll sound a lot tighter as well, any chance of a better quality stream cos like you said, it might be becuase it's in 64kbps.
other than that it's wicked! keep it up 
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silver
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Posted - 2004/04/05 : 12:58:22
Add a vocal and your gold :)
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whispering
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Posted - 2004/04/05 : 14:40:05
It's really good :)
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Exhile
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Posted - 2004/04/05 : 14:48:09
Yeah the percussion sounds superb. I agree that it would sound better if you built the soiund up more rather than it coming ina so sudden.
Personally i wouls choose a slightly different sound tyo for th actual lead though thats just personal taste
Very good track though
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NuFoundation
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Posted - 2004/04/06 : 04:27:09
Cheers guys :) I'll upload a high quality version when I get a chance, 56k, it'll take awhile.
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Seany
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Posted - 2004/04/15 : 21:04:06
Good stuff! :D ,Production quality is ace ,Phat leads ,Phat bass ,Nice! :)
Only thing that needs work is a bit of the structure =)
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Blue Frequency
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Posted - 2004/04/15 : 21:27:29
yeah mate, great tune, i love the suddeness of the synth and the breaks. make the parts of the track flow together a bit more and you got it.
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