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Charco
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 Posted - 2004/04/26 : 23:55:24
it's about time.....this is my first attempt at a tune, done it a while back and been meaning up put it onto here for ages...
After listening to it for a while i've noticed alot of bad points on it, but just thought i'd post it to see what u lot think of it? 
any feedback will be appreciated (as always on posts like these)...but just would like to know if you's like...or not.... cheers
I've done 2 versions of the tune and decided to put both up...
The first.....
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?pid=377082&T=1358
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Charco
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Posted - 2004/04/27 : 00:09:07
The"Tidied-up" version is up now. Again, let me know what you's think and any ideas to what to add will be greatly appreciated.... thanks..again
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=230636&T=110
These are the 2 versions....my first proper try at a decent tune...
I've some other stuff put together quickly that i might put up later.... 
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DJ Superman
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Posted - 2004/04/27 : 00:35:15
hey, I just listened to the newest version that you put up. this is wicked as a first attempt man, I really like it. the only thing I can think of possibly changing is the bass. it could be a little bit stabbier (new word) to make it stand out and make the tune a bit more stompy, other than that keep at it cos that's really good
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Charco
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Posted - 2004/04/27 : 00:38:35
cheers!! **feels all proud an emotional** haha
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Unity and Peace
Go Here: http://www.ionosphere.co.uk or here: http://www.sbthq.net . Happy? You should be!! And of course: My tunes: http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=230636&T=6580
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Dj Mynd Tryck
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Posted - 2004/04/27 : 01:40:10
What Program Did u Make this on?
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Charco
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Posted - 2004/04/27 : 01:54:54
can't honestly think of the name of it at the min....i'll have a check an post it...
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26 and 6 = 1.
Unity and Peace
Go Here: http://www.ionosphere.co.uk or here: http://www.sbthq.net . Happy? You should be!! And of course: My tunes: http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=230636&T=6580
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Squishy Star
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Posted - 2004/04/27 : 04:06:21
It's pretty cool!
But for some reason, it makes me think it sounds like something that would be played at a club...sounds commercial. Anyways, I really like it! Great Job!
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deejaybee
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Posted - 2004/05/07 : 03:47:59
Easy,
Try timing the loops in acid so that the strings you have sampled merge together a little better. Also, listen to a few professional hardcore tunes and check out the arrangment ... maybe get one of your fav tunes and copy the beats / percussion structure.
I would also get yourself a new kick, the one you are using there is lost in the mix and a good kick can really make a hardcore tune drive.
I like that you have opted not to use a strait forward 4/4 bassline... variety is good, be careful as too much variation from the 4/4 bass can make a track loose its drive and overall weaken what could be a good tune.
also, take a look into compression and the way it works, myself and overflow have started recently to use compression alot and i find that it helps the tune sound full and stand out, there are many many tutorials online regarding compression etc.
For the timebeing, being a nubee to the production thing, take a look into getting some software like fruity loops, or cubase, they are not amazingly complicated once you get the basics and they can produce some excellent results.
Overall.. i like the riff etc.... just do some tidying up here and there and you will be on to a winner.
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Charco
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Posted - 2004/05/07 : 04:29:07
very thankful for the feedback!!
thanks a million...and cheers!!!
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Go Here: http://www.ionosphere.co.uk or here: http://www.sbthq.net . Happy? You should be!! And of course: My tunes: http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=230636&T=6580
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marchhare
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Posted - 2004/05/07 : 11:01:18
I like it ,it kinda reminds me of back in the day playing megaman.
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DJ CURLY
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Posted - 2004/05/07 : 11:58:44
i haven't heard psy-trance when im not tripping, but this is what i imagine it to be like lol easpecially the bit in the middle.
nice little tune
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jimnicricket
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Posted - 2004/05/14 : 01:33:57
the levels are wonkey
and it kinda makes me want to play a video game!
ahhaha good job!
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