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Splix
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 Posted - 2004/06/10 : 11:36:05
http://www.3rror.com/~fusion/ldu/datas/users/246-Blahtune3.mp3
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JesterDJ
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 Posted - 2004/06/10 : 15:15:33
pretty good but to be honest, i thought the build was leading into something a bit more complex then just that sorta flat beat at the end; sorta left a bit to be desired; see if you can get a bit more variation in the synthesized bit, get the tone and bit higher to give it a bit of fluctuation and i reckon it'd be a class tune.
you have definately got the workings there for a bang on tune, but for me it sorta falls a tiny bit short of the mark. Keep working on it though mate, i'm sure you can make a success of this one!!!  good luck!!!
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Excessive
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Posted - 2004/06/10 : 15:32:03
I have to agree, the beat needs alot of work and the synthesized bit can get a bit distorted at times.
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hardcore anorak
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Posted - 2004/06/10 : 22:07:33
i agree sounds okay mate but the beats need a bit of work
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Phil_G
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Posted - 2004/06/10 : 22:38:57
better then i cud do mate so well done n a way
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Sakkara
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Posted - 2004/06/11 : 01:48:50
Good build up............ I know it's still a work in progress.
Change the kick drum, it's too heavy & flat.
Add some hats, claps & snares.
Once you've done that you'll see the difference in no time & it'll make it easier to move on to the next section. IMO a good tune will generally build itself once you know which direction you want to head in.
I like the synth riff (arpergios rock) & the tune shows promise, take some time with it & you'll see the rewards.
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Splix
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Posted - 2004/06/11 : 08:04:01
ok thx ill see what i can do.
when u mean a diffrentent drum beat what do u mean? like Half Gabba? or Soft like it is or what?
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bigmaddaz
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Posted - 2004/06/11 : 13:46:42
hey splix thats pretty good i like it :-)
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JesterDJ
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 Posted - 2004/06/11 : 16:08:32
if u can't be bothered to specifically change it to something u want or u don't really know what u wanna change it to, just put in a bit of breakbeat. sorted
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Splix
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Posted - 2004/06/12 : 14:05:06
oi check this one
http://www.3rror.com/~fusion/ldu/datas/users/246-Free.mp3
my friend says its timing is off but i dont see where, if u can see tell me. well somthing about the melody anyhow. n its based on the original tune there.
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JesterDJ
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Posted - 2004/06/12 : 16:30:45
thats class mate, definately a good tune that one!
the timing isn't off, its towards the end where the other part of the synth starts to come in; where its quite similar to the other one, it almost sounds like a bit of a clash which is what he thought made it sound off timing.
Good tune man, well done!!!! 
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Splix
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Posted - 2004/06/12 : 17:11:00
thanks
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