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eddiewould
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 Posted - 2004/09/09 : 08:31:02
Hey this is my latest track... looking for feedback, compliments & constructive critisism.
Also my new 'producer name' - M.E.R.L.I.N - what do people think?
Anyway here's the track:
http://homepages.paradise.net.nz/rossstan/mp3s/breakit.mp3
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Comet
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Posted - 2004/09/09 : 09:36:31
What's M.E.R.L.I.N stand for?
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eddiewould
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Posted - 2004/09/09 : 09:45:21
Doesn't stand for anything... I just like the name Merlin (the sourcer) from knights of the round table/camelot
Vagabond puts .'s inbetween his name... I presume just to look cool :)
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Comet
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Posted - 2004/09/09 : 11:03:02
V.A.G.A.B.O.N.D stands for Vigilant Artificial Guardian Assembled for Basic Observation and Nocturnal Destruction. Now you need to make yours stand for something. 
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marchorizon
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2004/09/09 : 19:53:12
The melodies and beat are good, but I am not very fond of the hyper donald duck sound all the way through the main section. I think you need to sort out the equalisation a bit too..you need more mid and hi frequencies to be present, If you played that tune loud in a club you are unlikely to hear a lot of detail..you would be feeling most of it pounding through you..
Come up with your name..
M.E.R.L.I.N - Momental Euphoria Replayed Loud Inverted Noise
and for me..
M.A.R.C - Me And Ravers Clubbing
H.O.R.I.Z.O.N - Honerable Over-Rejoicing In Zoo's Over-Night
and also for me
Liquifaction = The Liquid Faction (Group).
Liquiflexion = A reflection in liquid.
I hope to hear more from you soon..
..marc
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Edited by - marchorizon on 2004/09/09 19:56:08 |
DJ Mole
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Posted - 2004/09/09 : 19:56:30
MOLE - MOST OBSERVANT LATEX ELEPHANT
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in 1988 there was Acid House
in 92 the Break Beatz were new
1996 saw the rise of Drum & Bass
and in 2004 its HARDCORE!!!
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capone13
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 Posted - 2004/09/09 : 20:04:17
quote:
Originally posted by molesociety:
MOLE - MOST OBSERVANT LATEX ELEPHANT
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in 1988 there was Acid House
in 92 the Break Beatz were new
1996 saw the rise of Drum & Bass
and in 2004 its HARDCORE!!!
DJ J-me
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eddiewould
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Posted - 2004/09/12 : 02:14:15
so... what things should I work on to improve the mix, song flow etc
also i have real trouble sequencing 'interesting' drums
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2004/09/12 : 04:06:45
Whoa dude, the first thing i noticed is how off beat the percussion is. Your hat and kick sound like a trainwreck.
You have some very good ideas going on here and I can tell you know what your trying to do.
Keep working at it dude it will come to you but first of all get the percussion in time.
Turn down the first synth it gets a little loud and enoying. I like the middle bit and the cool breakdown thing you have going on, it would really sounds better with a good flow.
Overall it sounds promising you just have alot of work to do. Keep it up man!
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