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icex
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 Posted - 2004/12/22 : 06:48:05
plz listen let me know its not done as always, but let me know what u think about the idea and if u havent listened to my other track listen to it also.
its called the force.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/clubstyleusamusic.htm
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milo
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 07:12:01
sounds a bit 33-on-45 ish with the kick and the synths, give them more body, try chords and layering to flesh 'em out a bit. also go hunting for more drum samples, find something with more personality. the right ideas are all there though, give it a bit more structure and you'll have something more workable
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Brian K
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 07:36:24
too much going on, really like around 3:20 when the bouncy synth comes in. reminds me of early "happy" hardcore. that should be the meat of your track imo, build off that. nice that you aren't trying to be boring but there are too many changes.
kick drum is kind of eh, needs more beef. like milo said, it sounds like a trance record being played on 45.
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icex
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 07:42:14
thats da clubstyle sound boyz.
yea i know 2 much is going on but the key is to get it all together and ive been strugglin. i started this song over a month 1/2 ago and i just cant make it work with all the stuff i have i think im gonna have to get rid of stuff.
plz dont think this is a final version is just a sample of the idea of what its gonna be like.
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icex
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 07:45:08
the kick drum was being double kicked, but it was hurting my head while working on the track so i turned it off but forgot to turn it back on during mixdown.
also is there hope for this track or what?
and boo yea my other track went to place 16 on the soundclick techno hardcore charts and i didnt even send the link out to anywhere except happyhardcore.com.
just found out today when i uploaded the new track
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 13:47:57
The main thing you need is new percussion. I can't really give a good summary of the tune right now since its in really bad headphones but ill give you a more complete awnser when I hear it properly.
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djscorch
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 14:40:55
explosion in a trumpet factory, get rid of first synth, it doesn't sit well with the rest of the track
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icex
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 18:57:57
i never really learned how to do awesome percussion so i dont really how what do do.
i know what i need like those percussion durring breakdowns and like stutter percusiion but i just know how to make it sound awesome
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icex
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 19:23:01
i woke up today and i didnt like how it sounded so i basically stripped it to how it was yesterday morning except kept the breakdown.
im gonna change it and post it back up
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icex
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 21:00:03
ok its up now let me know what u think of the new version.
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 21:58:49
Now that I have had a proper listen it sounds like a trance song. One suggestion is to turn down that filtered synth.
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Charco
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 22:04:00
I like...I like. 
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Want to hear MY tunes???.....Thought not...but if you decide to.... http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=230636&T=6205 Please, leave a review and rate the song if you listen...not a lot to ask..is it..
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icex
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Posted - 2004/12/22 : 22:11:01
apollo whats wrong with the filtered synth, i think its super quite, only thing that i dont like about as im listening to it again is the pad , thats gonna go.
thx i like it guy i like it 2.
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2004/12/23 : 00:07:28
It's good dude don't worry. Message me up we can chat so were not on 2 diffrent pages here. Power combined is stronger then power agnst!
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