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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/26 : 20:26:48
hey check out its encoded in 96 kbit
please click here and u might have to click the music section on the right of the page.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/clubstyleusa_music.htm
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blockfire1000
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Posted - 2005/05/26 : 20:54:39
Don't like that at all..
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mark-ireland
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Posted - 2005/05/26 : 21:32:02
quote: Don't like that at all..
Same here.
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 00:33:04
quote: Originally posted by mark-ireland:
quote: Don't like that at all..
Same here.
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What he said. It's a ok attempt but the vocals dont match up wtih the riff at all. The kick is a bit screwed. The lead is ok but this track needs large amounts of work. --------------------------------------- - Sean Apollo http://apollo.hardcoreforya.net http://www.happyhardcore.com North American Hardcore Movement Addictive Vinyl Empyre Records [email protected]
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 00:40:10
i cant work on it basically i dont have monitors and in my speakers it sounds real good the kick, i know it clips cause cubase is telling me but there is nothing i can do if its coming out my speakers perfect.
i know the vocal is off but i dunno how to make it better. i need a teammate
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brown
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 00:42:02
quote: Originally posted by Sean Apollo:
quote: Originally posted by mark-ireland:
quote: Don't like that at all..
Same here.
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What he said. It's a ok attempt but the vocals dont match up wtih the riff at all. The kick is a bit screwed. The lead is ok but this track needs large amounts of work. --------------------------------------- - Sean Apollo http://apollo.hardcoreforya.net http://www.happyhardcore.com North American Hardcore Movement Addictive Vinyl Empyre Records [email protected]
i will 3rd that even dj rankin could do a better job and hes pish..lol sorry mate just being honest _______________________________________________________________ SHIT HAPPENS!!! but hey everything happens for a reason! [email protected] [email protected]
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 00:42:07
For the clipping, just turn the master down, also you may want to look at each individual channel make sure they are eqed and the volume is correct and you wont have a clipping problem.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 01:01:06
quote: Originally posted by Sean Apollo:
For the clipping, just turn the master down, also you may want to look at each individual channel make sure they are eqed and the volume is correct and you wont have a clipping problem.
oh ehehe i fix that problem, but i have to eq every channel???!!!!
AY GO CHECK IT OUT AGAIN I FIXED THE VOCALS AND MASTERED THE SONG.
WHAT DO U THINK ABOUT IT NOW?
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Edited by - icex on 2005/05/27 01:43:19 |
SickPigRecords
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 02:18:55
make the vocals fit
time stretching and such..
nice idea but might want to rethink that kick
and liven up the off stab but that is my opinion
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 02:21:17
Yeah the vocals really doesnt fit mate(its off key). That kick n bass makes it sound like a video game, id say stretch n reverb the bass or perhaps add another layer, and perhaps a different kick sample( i can send u a couple).
This track has potential to be alright, but not with those vocals imo.
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 02:37:25
icex, yes you do need to do a eq on most of your individual channels. Kick, bass, clap, hats im pretty sure they dont sound perfcit right when you load them up. Volume, High's, Mid range and lows all need to be checked out when mixing down the track for the best sound. Can't jut chuck it all together and expect it to sound good without some work.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 02:41:28
I quite like it.
Tune the kick. Because it's a 'round' sound it's actually playing a note. The wrong note.
Plus what Sean Apollo, SickPigRecords and scr8tch said.
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milo
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 04:33:58
hmm, you should learn the powers of the timestretch
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TypeR
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 05:15:42
the lead overpowers the whole tune and the vocals don't fit the feel of the song
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kathryn
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 11:00:34
I hate that tune 'Tocas miracle' her voice is so annoying!
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Edited by - kathryn on 2005/05/27 11:01:31 |
Jax
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 15:50:38
id ditch the vocals to be honest mate, as has already been said they clash. it would be a decent choon without the vocals and a better baseline
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