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steveh1873
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 Posted - 2005/06/02 : 20:07:29
thats a quality tune, wot program do you use to make it?
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mj-dream
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 21:11:12
yer wkd bulby i love the track i think the bassline is ok it wrks nice but if you want to try out a saw type line jus drop me the notes on msn n ill make ya one........thtd beef it up but i do like it how it is now :)
by far ur best wrk to date luvin it mate...........tht extra synth u added wrks fkin lovely : P
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 23:24:00
Cheers people :)
Steveh I use flstudio 4 vanguard and a few other vst's
MJ cheers man I will talk to you over the weekend about doing a saw bassline :)
If anyone else has any input for the final version it’s greatly appreciated
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/03 00:13:18 |
Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/06/03 : 00:19:38
The tracks good, personaly I dont really like the bassline this track needs somthing really dark and gritty. Everything els sounds good, a bit of clipping but its good. Work on the bass and you will have somthing pretty solid.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/03 : 14:34:00
Cheers I will definately be reworkin the bass have been speaking to MJ Dream and he has a plan for it :) i definately no what your sayin it doesn't match the feel of the tune.
On the clipping I have assumed this is to do with my levels and will keep tweaking till i get it right but i dont find it to easy with my dodgy home surround sound speakers. If there is any other reason you can think of other than it just being down to levels please share would be much apreciated :) Could it be to do with compression or something else?
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/03 14:36:04 |
The Deviant
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Posted - 2005/06/03 : 19:26:55
Just had a listen again, It sounds like you have too much compression on the whole track, or you ain't got the attack/release times sorted. I wouldn't say it clipping as the level isn't that high.
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/06/04 : 03:29:08
Hey nice track man, definately could use a mean ass bassline.
I like the flanged synths, but i think if u added a filtering 303ish sound underneath it, will definately make it more mean, or even a wicked acidline [;].
........Juss Passn By ; )........
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/04 : 13:16:07
Cheers guys, deviant i'll have a look at the compression I thought I might have bodged that a bit as im at an experimenting stage with it at the moment, cheers for the advice :)
Scratch I do want an acid line in it but havn't managed one that i'm pleased with yet so I have left it for now, I will be adding one if I can sort somethin out though definately ;)
The bassline will definately be changed for the final edit to something more fitting and hopefully people will comment on the final edit when its done :)
Thanks again for all the help everyone.
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/06 22:49:51 |
bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/06 : 23:11:04
Right another new edit (not the final edit as im gonna tuck it away for now till I learn to do an acid line).
New kick,
Harder bass but maybe not hard enough?,
And the bass its now played on a different note as Ionosphere pointed out to me it would be better played on a different note.
Thanks again for all the help people i'm gonna start a new project now this track will pop up again some time in the future when i learn acid lines and it will prob have a few other changes too.
Please feel free to comment on new base/kick and tell me if it sounds better or worse to you.
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mj-dream
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Posted - 2005/06/06 : 23:19:38
jus downloading bud :P
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mj-dream
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Posted - 2005/06/06 : 23:32:03
nice one............with tht new kik n bass it reminds me of the scottish bouncy era around the mid nineties and tht is never a bad thing as youl probly agree :P
i like it mate you get 9/10 from me and 11/10 for effort coz i know how much ya been wrking on it WELL DONE mate
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/07 : 14:16:27
:) Cheers mate. Yes the scotish bouncy era was top.
Lookin foward to hearing the whole of your next project!
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/06/07 : 19:55:13
By far the best thing you've done.
The bass is working now.
Some of the swooshes and whooshes are a little too loud and the distorted kick, imo, but that's just 'polishing'.
It's gone from a track that I didn't like to one that I do. Well worth the effort you put in.
Really looking forward to it with the additional acid lines.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/07 : 23:20:57
Nice one m8 cheers :) yeah it does need some polishing definately and i think the acid line will add alot for it as well.
I am leaving this track for a bit as I dont wonna fiddle with it too much and muck it up! im already an intro and 1st break into my next project which is it a bit more polished than this one but ill jus have to hope people like the tune ;) After that I should be ready to polish up this :)
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