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icex
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 Posted - 2005/06/28 : 20:47:21
hey i got a new track i want to get some feedback on because im kinda stuck.
no intro and outro rite now cause i didnt make them yet.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/clubstyleusa_music.htm
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/28 : 20:54:51
Yeah Sounding good so far the synth sounds are real nice and im lovin the hoovers. Would maybe take the bass out of the breaks and put some pads in or summin else and some delay on the hats as they seem to become part of the bass as there hittin just once at the same time if you get me. Sounding good so far though mate nice one.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/06/28 : 20:59:22
thx man i havent really done anything to the percussion ( as always) and the breakdown i spent no more then like 5 min on( i had the sounds made already before i made the breakdown ) i just dont know what to do so i left it alone.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/06/29 : 20:09:22
aww no 1 can leave me some feedback?
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/06/29 : 20:17:37
Tried to listen but the link crashed my server again.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/06/29 : 23:51:20
Sorted. Just had a listen.
Probably the nicest track you've done so far.
The Kick and Bass are a bit out of balance with each other.
Kick too quiet or the Bass too loud?.... and maybe bring the last riff in a bit sooner and then reintroduce the 'Choir' riff to fatten up the new one. If all that makes sense?
Vocals would fit really well too.....
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Listened again, imo, Bass too loud.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/06/30 : 01:21:35
thx man i dunno what to do about the kick if i compress it then the main channel clips and then i have to put the main volume superlow again!
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maattee
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Posted - 2005/06/30 : 03:39:01
I liked it. i thought it was hott!!
haha nice work
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zelachang
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Posted - 2005/06/30 : 06:05:05
had a listen and its good stuff
as noted before, kick and bass are kinda out of whack
I think a variation on the main riff right after the breakdown and right before the last riff would serve to mix it up a little (maybe like a reverb you did at the end? change the tone to go up instead of down if that makes any sense?)
anyways, its a great kinda chillout/ambient/hardcore song as it is, mad props
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icex
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Posted - 2005/06/30 : 06:53:19
thx a lot everyone i will take your comments into consideration. i just heard my version on soundclick and it cuts off early!! y didnt anyone tell me that!
its all good it just cut out the hoovers again.
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