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Splix
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 17:43:23

http://www.geocities.com/colin_rushton7/splix_alpha_clip.mp3

Enjoy, i wouldnt mind some feedback.

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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 19:32:52

Love it......

......nothing else to say yet, until it's finished.

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Squishy Star
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 19:33:39

sounding good, but i feel there could be something more to it...can't really explain. i'll leave that for the pros to say.

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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 23:47:43

Sounding real good so far

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bristolboy05
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 23:54:54

that sounds normall, hope u finish it.

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GaryMaguireXL
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Posted - 2005/07/13 : 23:59:11

Sounds well, although maybe layer the lead with another synth while turning it down slightly ;)

one more thing maybe add another pad with a lower octave to give it a more warmer sound.Just an Idea.

Nice Job

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DJ Phoenix
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Posted - 2005/07/14 : 00:38:16

sounding great Splix

i agree with Squishy, though. I think it is missing something...

when you let it build up, i personally think it would sound better if you really emphasise the chorus breaking out, instead of letting it continue just with a backing added to it. something like a pause, then a section of the lyrics like 'm-m-m-m-m-Mutation' then it kicks in

i hope you understand me, coz it sounds really good in my head, lol

nice work though bud

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whittle1
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Posted - 2005/07/14 : 00:44:59

It's good...
Nothing more

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Splix
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Posted - 2005/07/14 : 04:43:27

quote:
Originally posted by DJ Phoenix:
sounding great Splix

i agree with Squishy, though. I think it is missing something...

when you let it build up, i personally think it would sound better if you really emphasise the chorus breaking out, instead of letting it continue just with a backing added to it. something like a pause, then a section of the lyrics like 'm-m-m-m-m-Mutation' then it kicks in

i hope you understand me, coz it sounds really good in my head, lol

nice work though bud

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Yeah pretty good idea's. Im sure to edit it with those. i pretty much was going to do it later :P

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ryg0r
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Posted - 2005/07/14 : 04:47:39

Damn work computers. Anything with .mp3 is banned.

Very gay.

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DJ Phoenix
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Posted - 2005/07/14 : 11:52:01

quote:
Originally posted by Splix:
Yeah pretty good idea's. Im sure to edit it with those. i pretty much was going to do it later :P

oh nice one, heh

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Fishy
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Posted - 2005/07/14 : 12:54:05

It's ok, just a bit boring

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Sir Feli
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Posted - 2005/07/16 : 21:03:16

Good i liked it!
can't wait to hear it when it is finished

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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/07/17 : 03:39:00

Sounds good mate, will check back for any updates ; )

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Splix
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Posted - 2005/07/18 : 05:20:27

I wont be able to upload any updates for a while becoz i currently have just moved houses and do not have the net at the mo. It may take up to 3 weeks till i get hooked up again.

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