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eddiewould
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 New Zealand
375 posts Joined: Jun, 2004
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Posted - 2005/07/20 : 05:10:49
Hey guys its that time again :)
New tuneage. This time its called Rookie.
You can get it from here: (The link to download should be top right)
http://sloth.fishy.net.nz/~eddiewould/index.php Lemme know what you like/don't about it. I'm still learning so anything is useful! Got PLUR?
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Edited by - eddiewould on 2005/07/20 05:11:31 |
Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/07/20 : 17:30:04
Magic.
.....all it needs now, to make it a real blinder, is vocals.
Between the Earth and the Stars.
Website - http://www.ionosphere.co.uk
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CorDharel
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 Switzerland
544 posts Joined: Sep, 2003
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Posted - 2005/07/20 : 19:33:03
Wow, it sounds really great! Perhaps the main melody would sound better when you add a Digital Delay Line (I think youve done it in Reason right?), but thats just my opinion.
IMO It would also be cool if you would fade in some instruments, instead of just bringing them from one moment to the other.
I am sure this track could rock a party! 
[Edit] Oh I forgot. The beginning and the end sound really poor. perhaps u should insert a melody or a noise there.
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2005/07/20 19:34:44 |
eddiewould
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 New Zealand
375 posts Joined: Jun, 2004
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Posted - 2005/07/21 : 13:49:52
bump ?
Sorry about the long boring intro...
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Edited by - eddiewould on 2005/07/21 14:09:03 |
bulby_g
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 United Kingdom
7,205 posts Joined: Apr, 2004
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Posted - 2005/07/21 : 18:33:30
I really like the intro tbh think it sounds awsome the bass maybe needs tightening up it holds for too long other than that this is a really really awsome track! nice one mate.
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Sir Feli
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 United Kingdom
419 posts Joined: May, 2005
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Posted - 2005/07/25 : 00:18:58
listening.........
good work i liked it
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