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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2005/07/21 : 19:26:05
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My new track first non-freeform track I’ve attempted in a while feedback much appreciated, good or bad :)
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Posted - 2005/07/21 : 20:33:56
I like it, very catchy melody...however, I think its missing something. Maybe add a tinnier riff at the chorus for a bit more oomft.
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Posted - 2005/07/21 : 20:45:54
Not bad dude, but get away from vanguard, yuck :P
Let us know when its done, nice one.
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Posted - 2005/07/21 : 23:06:28
Cheers guys :)
Sean what would you recommend for some other soft synths vanguard is all I have.
B.C. will look into your rift idea had been thinking some pads might go well during the main chorus too.
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 03:09:31
i like it, dunno about the melody tho, not sure if i like it or not. i believe u need more synths. also its a just a lil repetitive.
vanguard is awesome , just dont use the played out presents.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 13:16:38
Cheers icex I will try to double the length of the melody I think the jump down then up may be a bit drastic as well I’ll see what I can do.
Would still like some other synths to use other than vanguard if anyone has any suggestions.
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 15:28:37
Have now completely changed the main melody and have tried to make the voc's a bit clearer (though as there not too clear to start with is proving difficult) would be good to hear from people who have listened if they think its better/worse? IMO it sounds better.
If anyone else who hasn't listened wants to post some feedback they are more than welcome :).
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 16:20:16
I like it. Like the lead alot. What program do you use to get the drums like it? I can never get them that good.
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 16:31:30
Cheers man :) all of the drums are done in flstudio using the effects that come with the program, the kick drum is just really compressed with a bit of distortion, I use a lil delay on the hats and snares as well as compression again (but a little less) & I eq all of them.
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Jon O-T
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 Posted - 2005/07/22 : 16:54:27
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Originally posted by bulby_g:
Cheers man :) all of the drums are done in flstudio using the effects that come with the program, the kick drum is just really compressed with a bit of distortion, I use a lil delay on the hats and snares as well as compression again (but a little less) & I eq all of them.
Sounds realy complicated, i used to have magix music maker 
I really like the tunez, definatly my kind of hardcore. Im not really that good at givin advice but the only thing i do think is that the happy melody at the begining should be a bit louder to make it stand out a bit more, but thats only my view, im not a dj. But brilliant tracks m8.
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 17:21:25
Wow sounding good to me:P
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 17:45:27
Cheers guys, Jon i'll take a look at my levels on the synths :)
Anyone else......?
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 18:28:59
Good track.
I go along with what's already been said, especially your own idea for adding some pads.
As to what other software/sounds to use, as wisely suggested by Sean Apollo,
I can't help, 'cos we use Macs, not PCs, and don't know what's suitable other than Reason.
...also, I'd make the vocals a bit louder.
It's definately got that 'bulby g' style though. Which is good.
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Posted - 2005/07/22 : 19:45:34
That's much better now Gary, I really like it.
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Posted - 2005/07/23 : 14:49:58
Cheers guys I'll do some changes now and post when its done :) I'll have a dig around on the web to see what software I can find if I get something that sounds better i'll use a different synth for the melody. If anyone wants to comment in the meantime feel free.
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/07/25 14:21:56 |
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