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icex
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 Posted - 2005/07/26 : 23:37:35
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/clubstyleusa_music.htm
NOW UPDATED PLZ LISTEN TO THE FINAL VERSION
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/07/26 : 23:46:32
nice defiantely my favourite tune that you've done :) I think you should maybe leave out the kick and bass when the pads break out at the start after the vocal and have it as a break then drop them with the melody when it kicks in. real nice tune I really like it.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/07/27 : 00:04:35
Yeh, I agree with bulby g.
....and, imo, a bit more percussion for added interest.
Nice stuff though.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/07/27 : 00:13:09
thx guys once i listened to it i relized i forgot another vocal section rite before the outro, and it also cut off the rest of the outro because the file was 2 big.
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Fishy
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Posted - 2005/07/27 : 00:55:00
Nice track mate, but i feel it needs something more:P its good tho!
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milo
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Posted - 2005/07/27 : 01:03:27
Deffinately been improving. still need to work on balancing everything out. your kick is really quiet and getting masked by your off stab. Try EQing each to stand out more on their own frequency wise, not volume wise, otherwise you'll just keep turning everything else up/down.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/07/27 : 17:48:18
i tried to make the kick loud. but as soon as i compress or eq it 2 much it starts to clip on its own! the way it is is the most i could eq and compresss it without....
ya percussion... i always lag on it cause thats the last thing i ever do in all my tracks.
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/07/28 : 14:25:04
Mellow dude, I really dig this one.
Lovely atmospheres, a lotta potential in this one ; )
........Juss Passn By ; )........
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icex
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Posted - 2005/08/01 : 23:06:14
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Originally posted by bulby_g:
nice defiantely my favourite tune that you've done :) I think you should maybe leave out the kick and bass when the pads break out at the start after the vocal and have it as a break then drop them with the melody when it kicks in. real nice tune I really like it.
thats how i had it at first but it sounded 2 weird
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milo
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Posted - 2005/08/02 : 04:47:35
It's getting there, good work on fixing up to get the kick to stand out more, sounds more in balance. Best way to do things early on is to A-B it, take a track you want yours to sound like, then work on yours, play it against that track, experiment and fix things, then go again. I like the vocal sample you used in there as well.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/08/02 : 16:44:55
Just listened to the re-worked mix.
Much more in balance and flows well now.
Lovely vocal sample and 303 but, imo, boost the mid range a bit to bring them out more.
Definitely your best work so far.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/08/02 : 20:35:30
Good work mate.
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