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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2005/08/14 : 22:40:03
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=610914&T=2314
New freeform track by me with hard intro and outro and soft main break. All feedback and general comments welcome and much appreciated :)
Ps I think maybe the bass needs changing as it doesn't really seem to suit the track IMO let me know if you agree cheers.
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yaddam205
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Posted - 2005/08/15 : 02:37:20
I can see where you need to "big up the base"  otherwise its pretty good, like the vocals
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Posted - 2005/08/15 : 13:08:08
Cheers man. Yeah i've allready started work on the bass im trying to make it roll a bit more at the moment it just seems out of place also gonna add another synth after the main break as it needs something extra when it drops.
No one else gonna have a listen?
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Posted - 2005/08/15 : 13:18:11
U done good there!
Am litenin to some of your other tunes and am likin 'In a warp' u got me movin whilst am sat here typin nice one!
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Posted - 2005/08/15 : 13:23:37
I think it's wicked, can't really give any constructive criticism though cause I've not a clue what I'm going on about : )
Good job anyway!
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Posted - 2005/08/15 : 14:14:52
Cheers guys glad you liked it and nice to hear your enjoying one of my other tracks too kathryn :)
UKr4veR - Dont mind if you don't produce its good to get everyones opinion.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/08/15 : 18:13:33
When the Bass comes in after the first break/drop instead it of playing -
G, A, C, F, try G, F, C, Asharp. That will give it a separate 'path' from the
main riff and add another dimension.
The vocal sample is a bit fluffy, maybe increase the mid' and lose a bit of lower range EQ?
Other than that it's a good tune.
Kathryn ain't the only one bouncing in her chair whilst typing. lol.
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Posted - 2005/08/15 : 18:18:44
i liked the intro it was cool, as soon as it goes into the build up i loses energy. the build up is good tho i think the best part of your track. i suggest adding more power to the kick and bass by compressing both of them. if need help with that u can pm me and ill let u know as little as i know :(
the breakdown i didnt really like i know u can do better. the pads kinda were weak and they switched notes all oddly. if i were you i would scrap and make better one. the main synth is not bad either.
i like the fx and vocals also.
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Posted - 2005/08/15 : 18:45:06
Cheers guys, nice to hear I’ve got a couple of people bouncin especially as its Monday :)
Ionosphere - I will swap the bass notes over and have a fiddle with the vocal. (Ill surprise you with the next tune and not follow the lead for once ;))
Icex - Ill work on the pads in the breakdown and see what I can come up with have pm'ed you also.
Thanks again for the help always much appreciated.
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Posted - 2005/08/16 : 21:37:15
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=610914&t=2944New link to updated version of track :)
still need to work on the bass but have changed: the note progression for the bass in th main drop, have redone the break and edited the vocals.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/08/16 : 21:46:31
sounds much better. now all u need to do is get our sounds to sound better.
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Posted - 2005/08/16 : 21:51:54
quote:
Originally posted by icex:
our sounds to sound better.
I guess you mean your sounds?
Do you mean the kick and the bass? I havn't changed them yet as it will mean adjusting all the levels so I was leaving it till last or do you just mean everything in general synths and all?
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Posted - 2005/08/16 : 22:27:37
Oh Yes!
That's more like it.
The note progression of the Bass is almost doing it now.
In the original version it was G, A, C, F.
In the updated version, G, F, C, Asharp, you've used the C an octave lower.
Try putting it back to where it was, an octave higher. That's what I had in mind.
As to what icex said about getting the sounds a bit better,
try EQing the lead synth with more Mid to bring it out, sharpen it's definition.
The vocals are nearly there as well. Again, more definition.
......and I was bouncing again. lol.
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Posted - 2005/08/16 : 22:39:20
quote:
Originally posted by Ionosphere:
......and I was bouncing again. lol.
Lol good to hear ;o)
Right, I have put the c an octave up on the bass should be sorted now will post an update once i've worked on the main lead and the vocals.
Cheers again guys.
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Posted - 2005/08/16 : 22:45:12
That was a great track! To bad you have to register to download it, it was really good!
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Posted - 2005/08/17 : 13:11:30
Glad you like it :) I assume you mean to completely download it not just to listen to it didn't realise you had to register for that, bit annoying may have to find another host.
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