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SERA
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 Posted - 2005/09/02 : 03:41:40
done in Fruity loops. An old version, but its the first time ive ever tried to make sumething, and i thought it was pretty darn decent, but then im biased!
so just how much potential might i have
here's ma tune (and yes im calling my self "dj XtarsiA" from now on)
http://www.xtarsia.com/music/ DJ XtarsiA - Butterfly Fields.mp3
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yaddam205
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Posted - 2005/09/02 : 03:50:54
I like it good job for your first time.
To me it sounds like japanese ambient video game music. But hey i like that lol
Keep it up
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Edited by - yaddam205 on 2005/09/02 03:51:24 |
Squishy Star
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Posted - 2005/09/02 : 04:37:02
omg i luv the bass in it, or whatever the constant thUMPing sound is.
too bad it's later in the night for me and everyone if off in their beds or else i'd be blasting the thing!
i'm playing it some what low and i reckon i'll be deaf by the time it's finish playing.
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2005/09/02 : 04:47:25
thats pretty damn good for your first try... my first try was a LOT shitter than that, at least you have some melody. The only thing id comment on is theres "not enough going on" try adding some synths and/or a bassline along with the kick... vanguard has some awesome synths and its easy to use. Hope that helps. Good job for your first try.
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SERA
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Posted - 2005/09/02 : 05:54:05
wow! thanx..
i turned the volume down on the kick drum and lower bass line now... was too loud (i couldent tell on my headphones).
added a "slightly further up the range bass line" too - not too sure about it.
added a fluttery and very very fast mellody thing too.. it fades out at the end. goes with the butterfly thin very well!
so more going on now.
as for the synths, i only got hold of fruity (v4 "studio") about a week ago, and its the first peice of software ive had.. i was given it by a m8 of mine.. ive reckon all the intruments can be improved but, ive only been makin this tune for..say 6 hours ish lol.
so what do we all think of the new version??
same place as before.. ^^^
(possably might change the instuments - no more "sim-synth!")
thanx for the possative remarks!! 
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SERA
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Posted - 2005/09/03 : 00:13:15
well ive basicly changed everything.
http://www.xtarsia.com/music/DJ%20XtarsiA%20-%20Butterfly%20Fields.mp3
its done and dusted.
now i really enjoyed making tht thing... so im gonna make another... not just yet thoguh..
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Lynny
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Posted - 2005/09/03 : 22:53:42
The melody is uplifting, so this tune contains what is need for a good happy hardcore song!
If I were you I would search for a singer, as a good vocal gives more plus!
To mention again, it's very nice job despite of the fact, that is your first work!
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