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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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 Posted - 2005/09/12 : 15:38:28
Hey guys!
I am still trying to improve my feeling to master ma tracks, and to do this, I created an good oldsch00l 180 bpm track. I also tried to improve the quality of the singing. I think its still getting better with each track.
So if u have some free minutes take the crazy ride with this track, its something really special 
here is teh download:
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-InHeavenWithYou.mp3
I'd be glad to hear ur opinion if the quality is good with ur sound speakers of if I did it totally wrong. (I guess my neighbours hate me now for having the bass so loud the whole time)
greetings
CorDharel
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schwveedish boi
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 15:43:21
that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
brass
people sed you before no sing from you from no??? It "turdy"
Shut up your Mouth!!
chek now
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=631296&T=7795
or....
http://www.happyhardcore.com/forums/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=23478
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Jax
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 15:44:46
that choon is sweet mate. u deffo are getting better with each choon. not tryin to be nasty but i really think u need to stop the vocals thou.
can you upload this choon without the vocals? i really dont think they do it justice
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Mastadon
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 15:51:28
Seriously bruv, this is proper sh*t, well not good, really crap, terrible!
Why do you sing, its rubbish, if you want vocals at least get a mate to do it, trust me anyone else would be better
The track itself is well budget, better stuff can be made on MTV Music Maker 2 for the PS2
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yaddam205
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United States
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 16:10:52
sounded just like another low quality trax from you, DONT JUST BURN OFF TRACKS they sound horrible
TAKE TIME
PLEASE
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jenks
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 16:19:50
quote:
Originally posted by schwveedish boi:
people sed you before no sing from you from no??? It "turdy"
Shut up your Mouth!!
How come you can speak English but not type it?
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 16:24:13
Wowowowowow guys stay composed!
@schwveedish boi
Some people told me they like my singing and some told me they dont, so don't f*cking tell me what to do with my life.
@DJ_JaXoN
Alright, .I will never sing again. Here is the instrumental version.
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-InHeavenWithYouInstrumental.mp3
@Mastadon
I don't think my singing is rubbish. In fact, I liked it.
And u never did a track by urself right? If u did, u wouldn't say this "information" with the MTV music maker. Try to hear the details in the tracks, there are many of em.
@yaddam205
Now ur opinion made me really sad. I took very much time for this track. This is the third version of it. I showed the first versions some friends and took their feedback to improve it. I tried to improve the quality over and over again. I tried to make it not boring and make it not too aggressive.
I really took my time. But now I am too sad  I think about never "disturb" u with a track again 
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yaddam205
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 16:33:51
I am also not that much of a fan of the old school so i grade it more harshly, keep posting tracks, you had a couple good ones a few months back, just dont post some track you just made it seems like 3 times a week now
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B.C
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 16:39:13
...indeed, it seems like you're always churning out tracks, do you have a job?
the vocals were really abismal, sorry, I probably couldn't do any better but it's just my opinion.
The instrumental was better but the quality is pretty poor and it does sound a bit patchy IMO.
Sorry, but you can't ask for feedback if you're not prepared for them to be honest..
Anyway, practice makes perfect.
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Mastadon
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 17:58:04
Can someone get a tissue for Cordahrel please- and a copy of "Music for Dummys"
My mate has been making tracks better than that for years, now his tracks Kane yours
And yes I've done 'vocals' on some tracks - but not sung because I can't sing and Can Accept that
And my track is better than yours, but I've got no-one to do the vocals Interested?
Try listening to stuff by Euphony & Storm and let them inspire you into making 'interesting' parts of a track that give it that bit more
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SERA
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 20:16:32
hey hey! give the guy a break!
yes he cant sing
and yes it sounds ameture(ish) tho if it were old school it would be at home i spose!
but i dont think theres a need to rip im to peices!
the lyrics are decent enough.
the tune goes well
and it is composed well enough.
the only thing draggin it down are probably a lack of decent soft/hardware
oh and the singing - ur just of key! alot mind u.
but dont stop!
im no pro at it though, and have only made one track.
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 22:57:13
You are right! Perhaps I am just too depressed right now because of my real life (I am looking for a new job)
I'll try to make it better
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/09/12 : 23:12:23
Its not that bad really the lyrics sound a bit too "punk" to fit the tune, really liked the first breakdown though.
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Xenochrome
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United States
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Posted - 2005/09/13 : 00:10:11
quote:
Originally posted by SERA:
hey hey! give the guy a break!
Agreed.
CorDharel is making the effort to put out some tracks for us to enjoy, so the least we can do is offer some constructive criticism without being *******s about it.
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Splix
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Australia
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Posted - 2005/09/13 : 05:20:07
Its for his own good.
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TypeR
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Posted - 2005/09/13 : 05:38:18
I dont' think it's fair to come down on him like he is a failure, but i guess he would never know what to do to make himself better if he didn't recieve critisim. Don't be so harsh but don't let it under your skin corDharel.
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