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CorDharel
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Switzerland
544 posts
Joined: Sep, 2003
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 Posted - 2005/09/16 : 18:57:59
Hi all!
This is a track I started a long time ago, and this is now the third version. I tried to make it as impressive as I could.
I think it kicks ass when u hear it very loud. I always have a ego party for myself 
I hope u won't say its cheap and I should take more time on my tracks whatsoever u know I really put much effort in this track, asked many friends for their opinions, changed it for- and backwards, made a second singing session, asked a friend for equalizing it and so on.
So please listen to it and tell me ur honest opinion.
Okay after this chit chat, here is tha track:
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-BreivaBreiva.mp3
Lyrics:
Breiva Breiva do what u wanna do
when death comes u have to be through
create what u would love to do
make ur own wild dreams come true
BWT breiva is from the word braver and I wanted to say that everyone is special, everyone is his own hero in his life.
I am looking forward to hear ur opinions.
CorDharel
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SERA
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United Kingdom
152 posts
Joined: Jun, 2005
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Posted - 2005/09/16 : 20:21:40
so far best ive heard from u!
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i like the piano
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singing still a teeny bit off key and is very quiet..but the piano is good!!
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good build up - i like this bit!
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main melody is pretty "there"
over all
10/10 for effort
8/10 for instrumental side
5/10 singing - still off key(only a little bit though), and wispershouting(or what ever it was!) i dont like
ditch the verse and jus leave the breiva breiva bits IMO. and it will end up in my collection!
overall
8/10
top stuff!
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B.C
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United Kingdom
1,747 posts
Joined: Jul, 2002
35 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2005/09/16 : 20:44:19
Nice one man, definately one of your best efforts to date. Just a couple of things :
agree with Sera about the verse, it needs eliminated completely IMO.
the tinny/chingy synth in the background played throughout could be changed to something a little deeper, I'm sure it's the same one that is in most of your tracks. The parts where you left it out sound much more professional. ie. 2:58+
I like the Breiva Breiva! thing though, it's quite catchy. You're definately improving.
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Edited by - B.C on 2005/09/16 20:45:02 |
Motion
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New Zealand
102 posts
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Posted - 2005/09/17 : 01:11:11
Your best track yet, CorDharel ;)
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2005/09/17 : 02:46:40
Like the singing? So u will definately go to roll on the floor laughing when u hear my first singing 
Here: http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/breivasinging.mp3
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2005/09/17 03:11:04 |
SERA
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/09/17 : 03:37:41
AARRRGGGHHH!!!!!!! MY EARS!!!!!
nah jus kiddin. it wasnt that bad really..
ive heard ALOT worse.
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2005/09/17 : 14:09:38
hmm but if Id used this vocals many people would have complained that they are shitty.
I know that 
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