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SERA
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 Posted - 2005/09/19 : 16:21:16
just tell me what u think!
http://www.xtarsia.com/music/XtarsiA%20-%20Altered%20State%20of%20Mind.mp3
any comments welcome!
i shant be plagueing u with loads more cos my time off ends this week...
is that a good thing or a bad thing? lol
hopefully better than the last tune.
all can be found here..http://www.xtarsia.com/music.php
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/09/19 : 18:31:53
Nice tune, sort of 'Chilled Happy Hardish-Core'.
It might work better if it had vocals and a slightly harder edge....
..... reminds me of a track we never finished 'cos we didn't know what to do with it.
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yaddam205
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Posted - 2005/09/19 : 19:29:53
quote:
Originally posted by Ionosphere:
Nice tune, sort of 'Chilled Happy Hardish-Core'.
yea... it's intresting and kinda like another sub-genre oh hardcore which is yet to be explored,
Keep comming out with these new unheard of tunes!
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Lynny
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Posted - 2005/09/19 : 20:20:40
I do like the melody again, so I listen your tune withiout stopping! Nice job! 
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-SP-
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Posted - 2005/09/19 : 20:33:43
Kind of a soft hhc... with some oldschool elements!
I love those square-synths :)
Maybe a harder drum could be better, but good job anyway :) Keep 'em coming!
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SERA
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Posted - 2005/09/20 : 18:36:44
updated! i just fiddled with the sound and adjusted the levels. little bit more bite to the first lead.. and a hard(er) kick. found same place as before
my main question now is, do u think it sounds "proffesional" or do i still have a fair way to go?
and thnx for the comments!
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/09/20 : 18:49:25
Yeah sounds good. The bass and the kick aren't present enough to drive the track along, maybe work on that a bit and also the first synth that comes in (the one thats held) try using a pad or something a little smoother if you get me.
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Posted - 2005/09/21 : 01:14:13
Close enough
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SERA
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Posted - 2005/09/21 : 01:35:35
well, i boosted the lower end of the bass line abit and changed the first synth as per bubly_g's advice, and i did find it an improvement myself!! so all in all im very happy!
next tune i am doing *allready*, will not be for a while lot of work to do!, expect singing by ME in it too...
glad ppl can enjoy what i make as much i like making it!!
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Lynny
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Posted - 2005/09/21 : 15:07:25
Good luck 4 your work with the following music! If you are ready, show us the result, pls! 
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