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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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 Posted - 2005/10/10 : 17:56:44
songs been in production for less than 24 hours, so i know theres still a LOT to do im just posting for some feedback yeah? while your there, check out across the sky as well, neither of them are finsihed but across the sky is a LOT closer to being finished than serious drugs. Check it out.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=393322
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/10/10 : 18:15:44
Quirky key structure, takes a bit of getting used to, imo some sort of pads would help,
but yeh, it's different, good different rather than "WTF is that?" different.
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tommy_renegade
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/10/10 : 18:33:05
not a bad wee tune, i like it :)
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SERA
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/10/10 : 19:18:48
hmm i like the "sound" of it. except in the main lead...kinda like a wrong note.. just what it seems to me.
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yaddam205
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United States
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53 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2005/10/10 : 19:27:50
The leveling of the elements of this song all need to be down at least by 25%. Other then that not bad, overall.
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Australia
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Posted - 2005/10/12 : 17:14:30
any more constructive criticism?
for either songs...?
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bulby_g
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/10/12 : 21:27:42
Sounding ok so far, the kick is way to loud and is causing distortion.
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Blue Frequency
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United States
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Posted - 2005/10/13 : 15:43:58
serious drugs - turn down that kick and maybe change that lead note-wise. sounds that about the 4th bar the lead should be 1/2 a step higher and the 8th bar could go "do do-do da! da! da!" for added spice. layer some pads in there and fill out the lead. change it up a bit. a good start though.
across the sky - same thing with the kick. its making my monitors cry. i really like that bass you use, fill it out a bit, make her nice and thick. vocals sound like they are going at a slower tempo that the track in some spots. work on percussion.
keep up the good work 
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