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NeXuS
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United States
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 Posted - 2005/11/30 : 19:21:42
soundin pretty good but it seems the biggest problem (judging from everyones comments) is that off beat sounding symbol with an almost invisible beat after it.
(note when i say symbol i mean that mini clash you have inbetween beats)
it sounds that way to me because your symbol sounds like it clashes right before the next beat and not directly inbetween... am i right??? :)
anyway if thats the case, i would first try putting in a drum or clap every other beat on the beat during that point. It would look like this:
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damn that came out alot different. anyway i was trying to say that there needs to be somthing there holding the beat, the offbeat sumbol alone makes it sound.... off.
Hope this help some way cuz it took a long ass time to type =P
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Sabretooth
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Australia
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Posted - 2005/12/01 : 22:33:50
Thanks for all the feedback guys, I'll sort out that inconsistency everyone has noticed and see if i can post an update soon (been a bit busy).
Hey Ionosphere, Ive sorted out the link, it appears when you chose the content of the song, it could possibly block out non members, but hte links fixed for non members now ; )
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/12/01 : 22:49:25
Yes, it works now, cheers mate.
I like it but, imo, the only bit that didn't do it for me was the sound used for the high pitched riff.
What if you changed the instrument to a Piano? ....with some delay on it .... and a lower register (left hand) riff as well?
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Sabretooth
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Posted - 2005/12/01 : 23:19:40
Will add that to my list mate, thanks for the pointer, might have to be the weekend before i can post an update ; )
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Sabretooth
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Posted - 2005/12/02 : 02:16:10
Just completed, lemme know what ya thinks.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/12/02 : 15:11:00
That's more like it.
It's now got some 'atmosphere', reminiscent of The Sabres of Paradise - 'Haunted Dancehall'.
imo, the 'piano' riff could do with being faded in to where you want it to start, rather than just starting,
and faded out beyond where it just stops.
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manutd76
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Posted - 2005/12/02 : 15:30:42
Nicely improved flows nicely :)
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Sabretooth
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Posted - 2005/12/02 : 23:45:02
Might have a look into that fading your saying Ionosphere after i post up my next track lol.
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Blackcrow
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Posted - 2005/12/03 : 00:43:19
Yeah......
I'm not sure about the name though, i think it may confuse a few people......
I mean.....Sometimes i wonder where it all ends, and i think i've found it, but i then find its all change, and i'm searching for a reason to cary on, i thought i didn't love it.....
That being said, i thought i'd moved on......
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Sabretooth
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Posted - 2005/12/03 : 01:50:06
quote:
Originally posted by Blackcrow:
I mean.....Sometimes i wonder where it all ends, and i think i've found it, but i then find its all change, and i'm searching for a reason to cary on, i thought i didn't love it.....
thats confusing mate lol, wasnt sure if you were commenting on the track or is it your signature.
anyways, the name i have no idea why i named it that and without any vocals, its kinda hard to come up with abstract names, so i might leave until maybe one day i add vocals or they magically appear ; )
Thanks for the feedback!
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