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Fishy
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 Posted - 2006/01/13 : 23:10:18
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=717747&t=6237 my new track please listen.. This is Dassfisken btw uve just changed my name
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2006/01/14 : 01:23:34
youre one happy chap ; ) but not my style unfortunately.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/01/14 : 01:48:37
It's alright but that piano is a bit 'slap-dash'.
.... and, come to think of it so are the synth arpeggios.
Come on man. Pull yourself together and pay a bit more attention to detail.
P.S. It's more melodic than the last one. :)
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djcuzinjoe
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Posted - 2006/01/14 : 06:26:23
could use a good cheesy vocal for sure otherwise i like it
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Fishy
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Posted - 2006/01/14 : 11:57:08
I dont really understad what u mean Ionosphere, but ill try to improve my track if u can tell me more concrete whats wrong with it
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/01/14 : 12:19:17
mmm.... not easy to explain.
I've got to get the ladders out and clean the dead leaves out of the gutter, so I'll have a think about it and let you know later. :)
Right.... PMed ya.
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Evel
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Posted - 2006/01/15 : 17:11:51
It's a good track, has a nice feel to it. Why did you change your name?
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Fishy
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Posted - 2006/01/15 : 19:14:29
Thanx Evel:) well i changed my name couse Dassfisken means toiletfish.. and I dont wanna be known as the toiletfish forever
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Evel
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Posted - 2006/01/15 : 20:00:24
quote:
Originally posted by Fishy:
Thanx Evel:) well i changed my name couse Dassfisken means toiletfish.. and I dont wanna be known as the toiletfish forever
lol. I never knew that!  
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Charco
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Posted - 2006/01/15 : 20:12:36
This tune has a LOT of potential....Ionosphere are great at offering advise..follow their advise.
But, with tidying and fixing...this could be an absolute belter of a tune!!!..so much potential here.
It's easy to get carried away when making a tune and have it change about 6 times in its duration. Stay focused on it and work on your favourite parts.
Would love to get my greedy hands on it!! 
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Fishy
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Posted - 2006/01/15 : 20:21:05
Wow thnks mustapha 
I'm workin on the track 
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Charco
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Posted - 2006/01/15 : 20:32:49
Work hard on it....The more effort you put in, the more you'll get out of it.
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Jon O-T
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 Posted - 2006/01/16 : 16:25:41
I like it.
Seams to change a lot.
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