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Phobz
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 Posted - 2006/01/30 : 20:18:27
Hi everyone
I am just posting a track I have just finished and was hoping for some feedback both positive and negative please.
http://www.hhcaddictz.net/downloads/tracks/DJ_Phobz_-_Uprising_(sample).mp3
Thanks
Paul
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Ionosphere
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 Posted - 2006/01/30 : 20:43:13
Good.
The melody seemed to wander a bit, really only the last 2 bars of the 16, imo, it didn't round it off.... erm.... to a satisfactory conclusion.
Do we have another contestant here for the next Production Competition? :)
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Leto
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 Posted - 2006/01/30 : 22:15:14
Try to work on your percussion a bit more. It seems somehow a little weird, but if that is what you were going for...
I like the melody...a lot actually. Nice track overall. For some reason, the claps seem out of place.
Interesting second breakdown. I like it. I also like the effects you used.
I have to agree with Ionosphere though. The melody needs more umph...(whatever that entails)
Compared to the other songs on this site, I give it a...B Nice work!!
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