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hidetherain
Starting Member
Canada
2 posts
Joined: Jan, 2006
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 Posted - 2006/02/01 : 21:35:37
hey guys,
Could you give me some insight on my tracks? I only got two online so It shouldnt take much for your daily routines.
click on hi-fi or lo-fi if you dont have a soundclick account. You dont need one to stream music :)
Thank you very much!
Sorry if I posted this at the wrong forum before! :)
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=467757
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GaryMaguireXL
Senior Member
Ireland
360 posts
Joined: Apr, 2004
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 Posted - 2006/02/05 : 01:17:49
I like the riff in Both Tracks.
One thing definetly look at is the silence in there ;)
Now There aint much happeing in these track, Try filling it out more with some breakz and percussion.Some effects maybe?
Production seems nice on both tracks but they do resemble each other quite a bit in the back bone area.
Try and layer the synths a bit more to give you more body .
But soom nice work their keep at it.
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Chris Deeside
Advanced Member
United Kingdom
532 posts
Joined: Sep, 2005
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Posted - 2006/02/05 : 01:19:39
definitely need more pecussion an effects n shit
add a loop to fill the percussion out a bit, change the kick aswell
i'd go for more of a punchy 1.. sounds too soft the 1 ya usin now
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