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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Australia
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Joined: Jun, 2005
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 Posted - 2006/02/05 : 11:43:19
If ya wanna have a listen tell me what you like/dislike about it, all feedback is welcome!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=459030
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DJBasehead
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Aug, 2005
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Posted - 2006/02/05 : 12:10:57
could do with more of a heavier bassline but it's ses techno hardcore so its not bad.
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GaryMaguireXL
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Ireland
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Joined: Apr, 2004
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Posted - 2006/02/05 : 20:41:58
Ok Had a listen
Try and get your balance right when making a track.Getting every part of the track sitting nicely so they dont over power each other.
One Thing that stood out was the keys on the piano was out of tune.Were they samples you were using, or a Vst?
The make you move sample could do with more work I can still hear the click at the end of the sample but again you might want it there, but I am pretty certain you didn't.
You need to work on your production, Try turning the master down to get the balance.Maybe some compression on the kick would help .The Vox is too over powering maybe turn it down.
Now on the tune itself, its not a bad effort, some nice ideas there but try and layer some of your synths to give them more body and keep things flowing ;)
Hope it helps
All The Best
Gary
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