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CorDharel
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Posted - 2006/02/24 : 20:07:47
This is a remake of my very first track "Love and Happy Hardcore"
Download: http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-LoveAndHappyHardcore2006.mp3 Enjoy! (if u want to hear the original here it is: http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-LoveAndHappyHardcore.mp3)
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2006/02/24 20:23:46 |
Leto
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Posted - 2006/02/25 : 17:08:05
Hmmm...
I don't particularly like either of them to be honest. The remake sounds overproduced. You've added a bit too much. Also, the vocals don't fit at all. I understand that that is how you want them to sound, but the lyrics are rambling and don't add anything to either of the songs.
I think that the work you did with the synth in the remake is nice, but it sounds a bit messy towards the end.
My suggestion: move on to another project! You have a lot of potential. So, keep working!
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Leto
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Posted - 2006/02/25 : 17:13:46
I think you should finish up Days of Freedom...that has a lot of potential.
Breiva, Breiva is really nice. But the synth seems to drift a little.
Try working on those :).
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2006/02/26 : 10:07:19
quote: You've added a bit too much
I see, thats what I thought anyone would say about the track Cause slowly I understand what the difference is between the hhc I like and the hhc some of you like I think thats cause I often listen to my hhc as music to think, for example while travelling to work, and not to dance. And thats exactly the reason cause there is so much stuff in it, cause I love all the changes in the track.
It sounds so weird, I love it I guess its a new kind of hhc, like "Trash Happy Hardcore" or something like that, cause I never heard a track like it 
But thanks for the advice. I Also thought about doing more with "Days of freedom" cause I often find myself listen to the track cause I need a slow fast track that is very chilling and fast together.
I'll see what I can do 
[Edit] Oh I forgot something: Listen to the quality of the remake and the first 'love and hhc'. Man this difference is so freaking B.I.G. imo.
As I was listening to the remake then the first one I was rolling on the floor laughing cause it sounded so cheap
I can do a re-remake in 5 years and I will see the difference again
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2006/02/26 10:11:30 |