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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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 Posted - 2006/03/03 : 13:52:58
Okay if you WANT you can help me out. I just want advice on the pads and synth and bass etc. Feedback is most welcomed. You dont have to give feedback... just post whats on your mind after hearing it...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=459030
PLEASE click the Hi-Fi link not the Lo-Fi link. I swear nothing could sound good Lo-FI.
Hopefully the song makes SOMEONE happy to hear it.
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Blue Frequency
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Posted - 2006/03/03 : 16:16:38
the piano sounds really flat. EQ that baby and add some delay. I dont know what to say about your bass cause I'm still trying to figure out how to build a decent bass synth.
mainly its just alot of little things you can do to spice the sound up. few effects, some light tweaks; polishing.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/03/03 : 16:51:23
what Blue frequency said.
Very nice ideas though and it's your best track so far.
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Fishy
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Posted - 2006/03/03 : 17:07:46
It's okey, I agree with the other guys here, but I don't like the vocals lol
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2006/03/03 : 23:42:24
dunno if its these crappy earphones on my laptop, but I cant hear the bass properly. Gotta realy look out for it.
Perhaps layer it with some saw bassed synths, add distortion and try brighten it up a bit.
However what im saying could be all wrong, as i cant access my monitors atm lol.
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2006/03/04 : 12:22:17
Improved the piano, added in lots of extra sound FX, and attempted to thicken up the lead synth... dunno if it worked thought. Let me know - better or worse? same link
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=459030
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/03/04 : 14:09:38
The Bass sounds out of key, flat, during the intro but after that it's all a big improvement : )
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2006/03/04 : 16:19:29
Thanks for the feedback.. anything else i can do to maybe improve the track a bit?
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/03/04 : 19:27:01
Make the intro sound like everything's in tune with itself. : )
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2006/03/04 : 21:52:52
Yeah sounds good so far, can't really add anything to whats been said already.
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bobthebrave
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Posted - 2006/03/05 : 10:46:37
found the tune quite catchy and really liked the piano
But the base is very over powering and found it distorted, and this efected the other sounds too
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2006/03/05 : 11:00:53
What im most worried about is that i think the pads suck... anyone else get this? Ive calmed down the bass a bit and did something with the intro so it doesnt sound so plain... uploading it soon be sure to check back
*EDIT* updated
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Blue Frequency
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Posted - 2006/03/07 : 00:50:20
bass still sounds off in the intro.
if you want to thicken the pads then layer 2-3 different sythns to fill out the sounds. make sure each synth is covering a different frequency in the "pad" range (low,mid,high) and make sure they have different sounds so it sounds colourful.
great piece of advice i pick up from these fourms - "lead with your drums"
this is the structure of your track. its like building a house. you can have the best paint in the world (synths/leads/basses) but if your frame is weak then you just end up with shit all over your lot 
i do like that synth line, just take it to the back a bit; accent.
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