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Liquid_NRG
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United States
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Joined: May, 2004
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 Posted - 2006/03/22 : 00:35:50
Hope you guys enjoy it.
It's free to use as you see fit, play it out, use it in a mix, or delete it if you wanna. 
http://www.hardkore-nrg.com/Liquid_NRG%20-%20Take%20Control.mp3
This is my first full length UK hardcore track.
Comments/Suggestions appreciated.
Thank You.
email me at [email protected]
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Jax
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2006/03/22 : 13:27:11
not a bad track that mate, i dont like the way the second vocals come in though the spoil it imo.
wait for some of the sites producers to give u some propper feedback though
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Smoogie
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2006/03/22 : 15:40:12
It's not a bad track, quite trancy for my liking but over all it's a thumbs up. 
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Liquid_NRG
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United States
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Posted - 2006/03/22 : 19:19:25
Thanks guy.
If any producers did have some constructive criticism, I would greatly appreciate it.
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bulby_g
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United Kingdom
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430 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2006/03/22 : 20:19:13
Not bas at all :) Especially for your first finished hardcore track. A few pointers:
Dont like the kick it doesnt hit hard enough, sounds bit like a loud house kick rather than a hardcore one.
Try not to use that Vanguard preset you got runnin in the background in place of percussion, real percussion would sound much better.
Some of the volumes need tweaking main lead especially (too loud).
It would sound better (IMO) if you varied the notes the bass plays on once the main lead kicks in, this will make it more interesting.
Hope this helps. Keep it up man will look forward to hearing some more stuff from you...
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Liquid_NRG
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United States
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Posted - 2006/03/22 : 21:19:30
Thanks Bulby.
I will rework the track and post up the result.
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Ionosphere
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2006/03/22 : 22:45:28
It's very good for a first attempt but I go along with Bulby.
The Bassline goes 'out of tune' in places because the rest of the tune moves away from it,
so you'll need to alter that.
The vocals are too low in the mix and the Hi Hats are virtually inaudible. They should be much louder, imo.
Post it up again when you've re-worked it.
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