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XtarsiA
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 Posted - 2006/04/08 : 21:49:04
opened FL studio, and made this ...thing 
http://www.xtarsia.com//temp/the%20thing.mp3
its.. a thing :D
needs alot of tidying up.. but its 45 min of messing around. id carry on, but im hungry!
should be a fun listen (well i think it is  )
feedback plz!
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Mortis
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Posted - 2006/04/08 : 21:53:56
I like the piano melody, but I think it's more of a bridge than a hook. The dark melody you had going on at the end was pretty phunky aswell.
All in all...pretty good.
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/04/09 : 00:38:58
cool thnx! glad u liked some of it!
i made it abit longer and tweeked it abit, nothing huge.
its just a mess around track :D
still kinda funky though :D (maybe some over use of the crowd outside my house...just kiddin lol)
any one else?
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yaddam205
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Posted - 2006/04/09 : 00:52:36
For less then an hr's worth of work. on that program. it's excellent in that light.
But yes like you said earlier needs work.
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Lynny
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Posted - 2006/04/09 : 11:53:36
Yes, the piano is very nice. And i like the scream effects too. Nice work! 
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charlieee
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Posted - 2006/04/09 : 12:08:20
yeh the piano bit is mad gud work
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mj-dream
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Posted - 2006/04/09 : 12:09:14
kinda funky mate
your stuff always seems to have tht funky edge and old feel,i think you should give this track a go mate......spend some time with it and get some ideas together.
good luck
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/04/09 : 13:36:05
You've got all the elements there, now it's just down to sorting the production.
As mj said, stick with it. : )
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/04/09 : 22:23:11
woah, thanx guys! guess i will stick with it abit!
im happyer now (some mofo's vandelised half my street last night.. and slashed a tyre on my car  )
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Leto
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 Posted - 2006/04/10 : 00:08:15
Wow...I agree with everything people have just said.
My advice, pay someone to engineer it for you...
IT HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL, but it still sounds a little muddy.
Lovin' it! Keep producing...you have incredible vision.
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miss_acer
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 08:16:29
quote:
Originally posted by XtarsiA:
(some mofo's vandelised half my street last night.. and slashed a tyre on my car )
Ugh some ppl sorry to hear that... Like everyone said definately stick with it for less than an hours work you've done really well! The piano melody is great.
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