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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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 Posted - 2006/04/10 : 09:24:25
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=459030
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 11:10:24
The last three notes of the fourth bar of the main riff are.... spoiling it. (I was going to say sh*t).
imo, it'd be better if they were the same as the first note in that last bar, or at least something a little more imaginative.
Apart from that, it's your best tune yet. 
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 16:38:49
i like the production, but what Ionosphere said those last few notes... i gotta agree.
its good though
what u using to produce?
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 17:39:39
still using Fruity loops mate... i seriously need to upgrade
P.S. Did you guys mean the 4th bar of 8th bar or both?
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 18:41:29
8th. its that little adjustment, on the second loop of the mellody, that sounds odd. even ur pad changes with it... and every other mellody after almost.
sounds out of key.
i dont think FL is bad lol, the latest (v6) can do prety much anything now, and they fixed the sound engine (at last!!!!!).
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 19:10:11
quote:
Originally posted by MaGiC_MuShRooM:
P.S. Did you guys mean the 4th bar of 8th bar or both?
Sorry mate, 8th bar. The 4th bar is cool. 
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2006/04/10 : 19:21:50
Cant add owt to what's been said but yeah sounding good so far :). That kicks allot better than ones you've used before.
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GaryMaguireXL
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Posted - 2006/04/11 : 10:14:55
Not a bad Effort
There is a few notes off there alright.
Maybe turn the kick down slighty its distorting a tiny bit. Put more thoughts into your transistions and make nothing appear out of nowhere because the punters would be like WTF?
Always make some aspects of the tune leading into other aspects for instance making all your sounds work well together.Thats the way I would try and look at things 
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2006/04/11 : 12:32:13
Yeah must also say the kicks seem a bit distorted.
Also i been seeing this broadband ad on Optus Cable tv which plays a tune that sounds so much like something ive heard from u a while back lol
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2006/04/11 : 18:25:37
hahaha no way seriously? something that sounds like mine? You cant remember what the song was can you? man thats weird... what the F*** does that mean!?
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2006/04/12 : 09:37:05
I updated the choon with some changes in the melody - Sound better?
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Smoogie
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 Posted - 2006/04/12 : 10:09:50
A nice mix of the classic piano and more modern 'trance' sounds. It gets the thumbs up from me.
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