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Phobz
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 Posted - 2006/04/17 : 21:01:16
Hi Everyone
I was hoping if you could check out my new remix of a tune I made a while back. I am looking for constructive feedback, bad points, good points etc. If you would be kind enough please 
http://www.hhcaddictz.net/Phobz_-_Hard_To_Beat_2006_Remix_Samp.mp3
Cheers
Paul
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Edited by - Phobz on 2006/04/18 01:40:10 |
bulby_g
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Posted - 2006/04/18 : 18:39:55
Levels are a little too all over the place might want to take a look at that. Not keen on the sound used for the main lead but it's OK. Overall a pretty good track that could be fantastic with some clearing up.
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2006/04/19 : 03:46:54
Cant play it for some reason, it says
"the input media format is invalid"
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NathanD
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Posted - 2006/04/19 : 04:28:11
This tune is bursting potenial!
Tidy up the production a little bit and you'll be well away! 
I think it would be better without the phaser / flanger on the lead.
Love the gabber style bit! love how it sweeps about, how you do that?
Keep it up, liking it!
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/04/19 : 14:07:27
Yeh, I go along with the bulbs & Nat....
Loads of potential.
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Infinity
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Posted - 2006/04/19 : 15:48:21
Needs some vocals :D
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Samination
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Posted - 2006/04/19 : 16:33:05
what? do Contraption need vocals? then Phobz dont need it :P
check out Phobz other stuff on happyhardcoreaddictz
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Phobz
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Posted - 2006/04/21 : 09:58:49
Thanks for all the feedbacks I will try and work on cleaning the track up and take out the phaser. How would I go about cleaning it up, e.g. Volumes on the channels, frequencies etc? Nathand: love how it sweeps about, how you do that? (Which bit is that I will put whatever I did on here). I never really liked using vocals I just like melodic music more really. I will try something though to see how it sounds, Samus knows what i'm like hehe
Cheers everyone I will post something up when i've worked on it a bit more
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Phobz
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Posted - 2006/04/29 : 12:34:27
Hey
Ok i've updated the track, changed a lot of it. Synth has changed and i've tried to clean up all my sounds and levels to what I think is rite. Would I be able to get a bit more feedback on what to fix please.
http://www.hhcaddictz.net/sample.mp3
Cheers 
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mj-dream
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Posted - 2006/04/29 : 13:30:08
grrrrrrrrr :D
best tune ive heard on happyhardcore.com in a few mnth mate ;)
i think.....beef the kick/bass combination up and it will be a winner.......its crying out for some toughness mate.........just put the raw in the core phatten the synths up and you have a top track.
the low and mid seems to lack imo you have all yur synths etc too high in the mix....cannot really hear the bass/kick
honestly though think its great......pisses on the shit producers get bigged up for today by farrr......take your time with it phobz it 100% sounds worth it.
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Simon
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Posted - 2006/04/29 : 13:45:50
I had a quick listen - I will listen again later.
It's got loads of potential, very catchy/happy.
I did think it was slightly too broken up a few odd break downs hear and there.
Cracking stuff though never the less - I will give you better feedback once I actually listen to it again and listen properly.
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/04/29 : 14:43:00
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love it :D
specially that notchy/bandpass phasey thing :D
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