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XtarsiA
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 Posted - 2006/05/02 : 14:48:24
http://www.xtarsia.com/temp/XtarsiA%20-%20Abudubumbiya.mp3
happy, energetic, abit quirky.
just something random i made, only short so plz listen and let me know what u think :D
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Fishy
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 14:58:00
Great 
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Sk8SiM
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 15:00:34
Waohhhhhhhh Whoooooo too load lol..... to much distorcion my friend...
try turning it down (on your master audio channel only)
don't alow the song to clip (go red)
Its either that or... just turn the lead down a bit *thumbs*
other then that...
fantastic work mate nice one... the melody can glitch sometimes but this isn't a problem...
just a few mastering issues that can easyly be sholved
Fantastic Work Keep It Up...
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 15:02:55
quote:
Originally posted by XtarsiA:
happy, energetic, abit quirky.
Absolutely, and why not?
sort out the production a bit and yeh, Happy Hardcore mate. : )
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 15:09:55
lol
it peaks at -0.2db :P
maybe u jas have ur systemt too loud :D
the mellody glitches?? when and what do u mean?
but thnx, im glad u like it :D
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 15:12:11
quote:
Originally posted by Ionosphere:
Absolutely, and why not?
sort out the production a bit and yeh, Happy Hardcore mate. : )
how? :S
i just dont know :( whats too loud, whats to quiet, sharp (lack of experiance)
maybe i'll go take a night course on it or something
also glad u like tho :)
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 15:20:30
a few tips -
The Kick and Bass get a bit lost in the mix.
are you running them through a compressor?
The lead sound is a little harsh, maybe EQ it to place it more comfortably in the audio spectrum.
Same with the Piano.
I couldn't detect any attempt at 'panning' the different elements in the stereo field, they're
all sitting on top of each other.
try that for starters and hear the difference. : )
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bristolboy05
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 17:07:58
i dont no anything about dj'ing so i cant give u any advice, but overall a good tune.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 18:33:28
Quality nice tune man. Clear up the production issues as people have said and you'll have an awesome tune here. That said I wasn't too keen on the scratch... bit iffy.
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Simon
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 19:15:02
Aye just mirroring what Ionosphere said - good stuff, why not, and clean it up a little (The production nothing else!).
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 22:16:03
Attempted to cleanup the production, i dont know about the kick and bass..they have very heavy comp on em
i adjusted the eq for most things. changed the piano (instrument sound) to something else.
panned loads if it (3-10% left or right randomly..?)
and played with the final eq/multiband compressor abit.
if its not cleaner/tidyer..
i'll go sign up for a course somewhere :D
and yeah the scratching is just a free sample i found on a website.
i tryed useing the fruity scratcher.... but it (rather I lol) was ALOT worse, so i setlled for for the sample, wich is a little out of time.
Thanx for the feedback :D
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-Bazza-
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Posted - 2006/05/02 : 22:26:31
Excellent, like it. I'd remove the scratching bit if I were you, I think that spoils it.
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