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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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 Posted - 2006/05/17 : 17:53:40
its still in early development and ther IS going to be vocals on it but its in progress at the moment so i guess you can pretty much ignore the breakdown, otherwise feel free to give me any feedback on the song!
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Okay so i did a couple of things to update it. Fixed the lead (it no longer sounds out of place at times) and attempted to fix the pad in the breakdown and the breakdown itself. Have a listen!!
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2006/05/22 : 18:52:22
UPDATED - HAVE ANOTHER LISTEN!
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Leto
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Posted - 2006/05/22 : 18:59:47
Your best work, but the main lead is still weird sounding. I like the breakdown though. Keep working, but maybe move on to a new idea. Still, good progress overall.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/05/22 : 22:42:44
The note at the end of the 7th bar is a little off putting.
It's good that you've tried to make it different but, imo, it's the wrong kind of different.
Jackson's right, (soz, subtle play on words with leto's name) it's your best yet.
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Leto
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Posted - 2006/05/22 : 23:27:50
quote:
Originally posted by Ionosphere:
Jackson's right, (soz, subtle play on words with leto's name) it's your best yet.
Very subtle...never been done before, either. Quite original. :P
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