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Caliga
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 Posted - 2006/05/22 : 14:14:32
Be gentle people=] Ive made a few songs before, but never actually a proper attempt. I know a few problems it has, for a start it needs more variaton, and less repetition! But i would very much like it if you guys would take a listen and give me some constructive critisism. That way i can do much better in the future=]
As i said, be gentle! Im only ickle!!! =D
http://www.caliga.co.uk/DjCaliga-A_new_drug.mp3
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Chwhynny
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Posted - 2006/05/22 : 16:32:20
Nice attempt, but it seems to drag a little. Try some variation in the percussion and riffs, and mainly the structure. Also, your synths are a bit meh. And where's the bass? Try to work on those bits and I think it will improve lots.
Doesn't really seem up to scratch to be released, if I am honest... What label is it on? :|
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/05/22 : 16:49:17
I go along with Chwhynny on this although I presumed that this was your first public airing of a tune
rather than a record release....?
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Caliga
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Posted - 2006/05/22 : 22:03:54
by release i ment, song i made...didnt realise everyone was so good on here they actually release tracks >_< im way behind!!
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/05/23 : 01:05:14
nah ur not way behind :)
there way ahead :D
(of most of us)
track defo did drag out im afraid, reeealllly looong and kinda depressing i felt :(
maybe thats the feel ur after..
i can see a room full of skeleton cultists dressed in black robes holdin candles all wobling from side to side to rather ghostly dj .. with plenty of dull coloured mist floating around lol
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Chwhynny
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Posted - 2006/05/23 : 08:15:30
quote:
Originally posted by Caliga:
by release i ment, song i made...didnt realise everyone was so good on here they actually release tracks >_< im way behind!!
Oh, I see. :)
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Da Cunney Bugz
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Posted - 2006/05/23 : 09:17:20
track seem quite good for first attempt, like said up there though just give it a bit more depth and possibly speed it up slightly feels like its being held back 
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2006/05/23 : 09:52:26
I definately agree with whats already been said.
After all, they are words from a proper pro producer ; )
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Caliga
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Posted - 2006/05/23 : 13:30:50
This is a good forum i must say, on certain other forums im on which cannot be mentioned people just say "oh your s**t do something else"
XtarsiA thats quite a cool image youve come up with there, cultists and candles=D i think its probably cos i have been listening to alot of Gabba/Hardcore, i need to aim things at the more happy side of things and less morbid!! Working on another track faster, happier, and more bouncy=]
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Blue Frequency
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Posted - 2006/05/23 : 17:48:42
what everyone else said, bass, synths sound weak.
but that doesnt make it bad.
I REALLY (and I mean REALLY) love the lead. im talking about the note progression, sounds so evily cool.
throw in a massive gabber kick and some detuned leads following that note structure. mmm, evil stompin goodness.
matter of fact, im going to play that part again (steals for himself  )
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http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=9F687A8A33A1E75A
Heres a Kick I made for you to play with.
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