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darx23
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 Posted - 2006/06/01 : 13:02:42
Allrigt,here s a short clip of a tune of mine,do you people think it would be suitable for the masses since the tune is a bit progressive?
Looking foward to some replys
[url][/url]http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SW6N9J66
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/06/02 : 17:31:44
It's not particularly Progressive, so that won't prevent it from being "suitable for the masses" but
maybe the progressive rising scale might.
It's not bad but, imo, the repetitive scale needs something else to break the monotony of it.
(maybe there are no other replies to this because of the download site you use. Try this one next time http://www.yousendit.com)
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/06/02 : 17:56:12
i cant say im too much of fan of this one im afraid, as iono said, that raising thing is abit too much, though at 55s, it could just see it all changing and going into a more usual progesion.. then it would be great :D
and maybe change the rythem of raising, ie in the last bar every other time round make it jump an extra time in half the time if u get what i mean,
kinda reminded me of that line dancing song what ever it was called lol, probably because of the synth though. :)
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darx23
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Posted - 2006/06/02 : 17:59:13
Yeah mate,I know the scale is Veery basic,but what I was talking about when I said progressive is that at some moments of the song three different melodies playing together+chords+bass...
now I know it would overall sound better if it had less sounds but it just came up that way,happens to me sometimes...
I m really corious what you feel on the production side,sounds balance.......
I will work on my progressions and thanx for the yousendit advice,I was looking for a good server.....
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